Fuck, fuck, fuck! That bastard of yours such a jerk! I already hate DR extremely! He noticed the girls smiling, oh, shit! Awww, Cara she tried to cover for Dahlia but failed. IDK the young Cara is so precious. Dahlia is scared, I’m scared too :( Something bad is going to happen. "Use your fingers," Dahlia pleaded softly, cradling the top of Cara's head into her. "He'll know if he tastes your tongue. I don't want him to hurt you. Please." "I hate when you worry about me." Yes, Dalia should think about herself sometimes. Poor baby girl, DR is inevitable. I loved the lovemaking scene, can’t call it differently. Cara gave Dahlia something more than an orgasm. I heart how she tries to distract her, to give her something to remember and just soothes her. It was so tender and touching, wait, and hot! It was such a cool moment when Dahlia let out her aggression and frustration on Lorel! Cara knows well all these preparations I guess she is a frequent visitor in the room :\ How they are talking about the lake and the moon…I know you want to break my little heart and leave me like that. I can’t continue reading…I have to pause… I hate him! Lexa, you are evil! What are you doing to me? I’m all hurt and crying again. Now that son of a whore broke her arm. And his mouth full of venom. No, Dahlia, don’t listen to him, Cara loves you for real! "Her innocence…" Lord Rahl explained, "has no place here." Wow! He is right, that jerk. Sex on top of a dead body. You are little perv! At least it’s a soft surface not like a floor. Poor baby :\ dead, all alone and in a pain… Yes, Mistress Cara for the rescue! Again, Cara saves the day! It’s her nature and the destiny- to save the day and the hurt little girls. That fuck didn’t say a word about dead Dahlia :\ . "What if Lord Rahl intended for me to stay in the Underworld?" "I don’t care, I would never leave you there," she said, "I love you." Aww, she has Cara to look after her! But seriously, nobody knew. What, he meant to kill her finally or just forgot? Cara gambles with her own life for Dahlia. What else can it be if not love?
I loved that update deeply even I had to stop reading a couple of times. I’m becoming too emotional probably due to my old age and a weaken heart. Seriously, Lexa, you’ve created such a dark and beautiful love story! I enjoy every moment of it! Thank you very much for sharing it with me! Milk and cookies? To keep your muse energetic :D
lol OMG I warned you DR would be an awful freak!! <333333 Now you know why I was so obssessed with your DR stories and my incessant questions about him!! I couldn't stop. But you said add darkness *evil snicker*!!! Awwwwwww don't cry (I'm comforting you Dahlia-style) How disgusting is that son of a whore(lol)?? Telling Dahlia all those terrible things and she just takes it? But Cara said do whatever and you know she would. Sex on the dead body...I tried to think of one of the worst things imaginable he could do to her and that was pretty up there...it's almost like he also taunts her sexuality by making her do that.
I sorta liked seeing Cara that way, all loving and selfless and such. I kinda did a shoutout to GWTW like when Rhett says to Scarlett "I liked to think that Bonnie was you, a little girl again, before the war, and poverty had done things to you. She was so like you, and I could pet her and spoil her, as I wanted to spoil you" Like maybe that's partially why Dahlia likes Kahlan...I always loved that idea and find there's usually alot of truth in that in RL
I'm so thrilled you like their little stairs "lovemaking" XD scene...Cara definitely was trying to do her best there and had a tall order to fill. She has mad distraction skills and she was so in love...awww...she made me pretty happy there and I'm glad she was able to do the same for u :D
I like how we think Dahlia's kinda weird and has strange interests and desires. Like you say, she's not a "proper" Mord'Sith and Cara indulged her so sweetly back then. Not sure Cara would do it quite as much or as eloquently in the days before Dahlia left her idk...
But yeah, your idea about Lord Rahl "forgetting" Dahlia was the best!!! I just twisted it slightly. I'm glad you agree about Cara loving Dahlia awwww, I love them...even I got a little emotional writing it. :***(
You're verrrrrry welcome, you helped with this part alot!!! I hope part 8 won't be as gross but no guarantees, of course ;) I tried to balance it's darkness a little but I agree, the dark was very dark so thanks for hanging in there. THANK YOU for the milk and cookies, it's awesome!!!! I feel sweeter already. ILU!
Your DR is a scary freak and he is awfully mean. I know you struggled to make him to fit into the story. You did a great job! I mean it. He is such an immoral and vicious man I hate him and afraid so much of what else he can do. I applaud you for creating that MONSTER!
I sorta liked seeing Cara that way, all loving and selfless and such. I kinda did a shoutout to GWTW like when Rhett says to Scarlett "I liked to think that Bonnie was you, a little girl again, before the war, and poverty had done things to you. She was so like you, and I could pet her and spoil her, as I wanted to spoil you" Like maybe that's partially why Dahlia likes Kahlan... !!!!!!!!!!!! Yes! That horrible life scarred Cara a lot! Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. And yes, Kahlan with her love and her broken defiant spirit reminded Dahlia about young broken Cara who still had the remnants of a terrific caring and loving girl she was before the capture. I looooved your Rhett’s quote!!! Bull’s eye! So appropriate!
Cara has mad distraction skills and she was so in love...awww...she made me pretty happy there and I'm glad she was able to do the same for u :D TRUFAX!!! For some time I forgot where Cara was taking Dalia XD!!!!
I believe that Cara took Dahlia to the lake and they swam there looking at the full moon and loved each other! Unfortunately for both of them DR decided to make Cara his favorite and the constant torture and suffering closed her for the world and she became noticeably more mad and brutal than an average M’S.
You killed me dead with C/D end scene! It was very emotional for the old bear! Thank you!
I know that you’ll keep write dark :) You don’t tolerate too much fluff. Just don’t be too obsessed with the darkness! Still, in the end, it’s a love story, right? Although there are plenty of darkness in girls’ relationships. U r welcome! For all the joy you give me at least I can offer you my virtual love and virtual cookies, lol!
Oh wow, your DR compliments mean alot to me...he totally even scares me somehow. I definitely didn't know that much about him before your "lessons" about him lol. So he's kinda like our DR! It hurt me the most when he said those mean things about Cara's love...what an asshole.
*blush* How amazing is Rhett and his perceptions of things? He completely understood Scarlett IMHO. I look to them alot for inspiration. It's like, after he said that line, it was suddenly all so clear how right he was. I just die for it.
Awww yeah Dahlia really wanted to go that lake dammit!! :D idk she has dreams...
Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. OMG YES!! So perfect, I can't even...
You don’t tolerate too much fluff Omg so guilty! idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story, you're right lol XD
I like how you look for inspiration in R/S relations! They are very complicated and terrific! And spot on!
idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story. Heee, I like that story better! I'm glad that you are "less normal" :P
btw, I've read a pretty strange but hot fic by lexus_grey where Kahlan is sub (for now) and Cara is not in lovey-dovey love with K but all Mord'Sithy! Fic called "Trained", 2 updates so far. Very short, it'll take a 1/2 hours top to read.
Awww, Cara she tried to cover for Dahlia but failed. IDK the young Cara is so precious.
Dahlia is scared, I’m scared too :( Something bad is going to happen.
"Use your fingers," Dahlia pleaded softly, cradling the top of Cara's head into her. "He'll know if he tastes your tongue. I don't want him to hurt you. Please." "I hate when you worry about me." Yes, Dalia should think about herself sometimes. Poor baby girl, DR is inevitable.
I loved the lovemaking scene, can’t call it differently. Cara gave Dahlia something more than an orgasm. I heart how she tries to distract her, to give her something to remember and just soothes her. It was so tender and touching, wait, and hot!
It was such a cool moment when Dahlia let out her aggression and frustration on Lorel! Cara knows well all these preparations I guess she is a frequent visitor in the room :\
How they are talking about the lake and the moon…I know you want to break my little heart and leave me like that. I can’t continue reading…I have to pause…
I hate him! Lexa, you are evil! What are you doing to me? I’m all hurt and crying again. Now that son of a whore broke her arm. And his mouth full of venom. No, Dahlia, don’t listen to him, Cara loves you for real!
"Her innocence…" Lord Rahl explained, "has no place here." Wow! He is right, that jerk.
Sex on top of a dead body. You are little perv! At least it’s a soft surface not like a floor.
Poor baby :\ dead, all alone and in a pain…
Yes, Mistress Cara for the rescue! Again, Cara saves the day! It’s her nature and the destiny- to save the day and the hurt little girls.
That fuck didn’t say a word about dead Dahlia :\ . "What if Lord Rahl intended for me to stay in the Underworld?" "I don’t care, I would never leave you there," she said, "I love you." Aww, she has Cara to look after her! But seriously, nobody knew. What, he meant to kill her finally or just forgot? Cara gambles with her own life for Dahlia. What else can it be if not love?
I loved that update deeply even I had to stop reading a couple of times. I’m becoming too emotional probably due to my old age and a weaken heart. Seriously, Lexa, you’ve created such a dark and beautiful love story! I enjoy every moment of it! Thank you very much for sharing it with me! Milk and cookies? To keep your muse energetic :D
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Now you know why I was so obssessed with your DR stories and my incessant questions about him!! I couldn't stop. But you said add darkness *evil snicker*!!! Awwwwwww don't cry (I'm comforting you Dahlia-style) How disgusting is that son of a whore(lol)?? Telling Dahlia all those terrible things and she just takes it? But Cara said do whatever and you know she would. Sex on the dead body...I tried to think of one of the worst things imaginable he could do to her and that was pretty up there...it's almost like he also taunts her sexuality by making her do that.
I sorta liked seeing Cara that way, all loving and selfless and such. I kinda did a shoutout to GWTW like when Rhett says to Scarlett "I liked to think that Bonnie was you, a little girl again, before the war, and poverty had done things to you. She was so like you, and I could pet her and spoil her, as I wanted to spoil you" Like maybe that's partially why Dahlia likes Kahlan...I always loved that idea and find there's usually alot of truth in that in RL
I'm so thrilled you like their little stairs "lovemaking" XD scene...Cara definitely was trying to do her best there and had a tall order to fill. She has mad distraction skills and she was so in love...awww...she made me pretty happy there and I'm glad she was able to do the same for u :D
I like how we think Dahlia's kinda weird and has strange interests and desires. Like you say, she's not a "proper" Mord'Sith and Cara indulged her so sweetly back then. Not sure Cara would do it quite as much or as eloquently in the days before Dahlia left her idk...
But yeah, your idea about Lord Rahl "forgetting" Dahlia was the best!!! I just twisted it slightly. I'm glad you agree about Cara loving Dahlia awwww, I love them...even I got a little emotional writing it. :***(
You're verrrrrry welcome, you helped with this part alot!!! I hope part 8 won't be as gross but no guarantees, of course ;)
I tried to balance it's darkness a little but I agree, the dark was very dark so thanks for hanging in there. THANK YOU for the milk and cookies, it's awesome!!!! I feel sweeter already. ILU!
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I sorta liked seeing Cara that way, all loving and selfless and such. I kinda did a shoutout to GWTW like when Rhett says to Scarlett "I liked to think that Bonnie was you, a little girl again, before the war, and poverty had done things to you. She was so like you, and I could pet her and spoil her, as I wanted to spoil you" Like maybe that's partially why Dahlia likes Kahlan...
!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes! That horrible life scarred Cara a lot! Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. And yes, Kahlan with her love and her broken defiant spirit reminded Dahlia about young broken Cara who still had the remnants of a terrific caring and loving girl she was before the capture.
I looooved your Rhett’s quote!!! Bull’s eye! So appropriate!
Cara has mad distraction skills and she was so in love...awww...she made me pretty happy there and I'm glad she was able to do the same for u :D TRUFAX!!! For some time I forgot where Cara was taking Dalia XD!!!!
I believe that Cara took Dahlia to the lake and they swam there looking at the full moon and loved each other!
Unfortunately for both of them DR decided to make Cara his favorite and the constant torture and suffering closed her for the world and she became noticeably more mad and brutal than an average M’S.
You killed me dead with C/D end scene! It was very emotional for the old bear! Thank you!
I know that you’ll keep write dark :) You don’t tolerate too much fluff. Just don’t be too obsessed with the darkness! Still, in the end, it’s a love story, right? Although there are plenty of darkness in girls’ relationships.
U r welcome! For all the joy you give me at least I can offer you my virtual love and virtual cookies, lol!
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*blush* How amazing is Rhett and his perceptions of things? He completely understood Scarlett IMHO. I look to them alot for inspiration. It's like, after he said that line, it was suddenly all so clear how right he was. I just die for it.
Awww yeah Dahlia really wanted to go that lake dammit!! :D idk she has dreams...
Maybe BECAUSE she was so selfless and loving she just took everything what live gave her too hard and totally closed herself even from Dahlia to preserve that little what she was left with. OMG YES!! So perfect, I can't even...
You don’t tolerate too much fluff Omg so guilty! idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story, you're right lol XD
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idk sometimes I wish I was more normal and could get into all the lovey C/K but, oh lol, it's just not me. This is definitely my version of a love story. Heee, I like that story better! I'm glad that you are "less normal" :P
btw, I've read a pretty strange but hot fic by lexus_grey where Kahlan is sub (for now) and Cara is not in lovey-dovey love with K but all Mord'Sithy! Fic called "Trained", 2 updates so far. Very short, it'll take a 1/2 hours top to read.
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I'm glad that you are "less normal" :P Awwww you're good to me, thanks *hugs*
That fic sounds like exactly like my kinda stuff, definitely gonna read tomorrow, can't wait :D
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