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Aug 28, 2010 15:41

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alice_pike August 29 2010, 19:03:26 UTC
It wasn't really their fault.

You see, the thing is, both Nico and Percy are kind of oblivious to social cues. Nico spends most of his time around people who aren't even alive (so he can hardly be blamed) and Percy is...well, Percy.

It's one of the first things Annabeth and Rachel agree upon. The four of them are sitting in Rachel's living room (if anything in the Dare estate can be considered something as mundane as a living room) over Christmas break. Percy arrived with Annabeth earlier, having visited her in Olympus for a few days, and Nico materialized from the shadows from who-knows-where with not so much as a "Hello ( ... )

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lettersandliars August 29 2010, 19:37:42 UTC
Awkward Nico and Percy ftw! <3

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alice_pike August 29 2010, 23:40:58 UTC
Rachel gets out of Clarion a couple of days before Percy's school year ends, and she waits in the lobby of the Empire State Building for Annabeth to come down from Olympus ( ... )

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alice_pike August 30 2010, 00:40:22 UTC
Percy and Annabeth make their way to camp a few days later, and it's mostly an uneventful trip. They kill a couple of monsters on the way there (all of the demigods now pouring into New York certainly must alert them) but Percy laughs through most of the fight and Annabeth is happy for the exercise.

They meet Rachel when they get there. She's staying in a room in the Big House for the summer, although she frowns when they ask her about it. "Apollo decorated it," she informs them, and they both visibly cringe. "Yeah, tell me about it," she agrees ( ... )

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lettersandliars August 30 2010, 01:38:59 UTC
I am loving this to death, jsyk.

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alice_pike August 30 2010, 20:32:14 UTC
A few weeks pass and the unresolved sexual tension between Percy and Nico only keeps growing. Annabeth's about ready to punch both of them in the face, because they are still completely oblivious.

"What do you think they think is happening?" Rachel asks Annabeth one afternoon, as they lounge in Rachel's room.

Annabeth makes a disgusted face and throws up her hands. "I don't even want to know at this point. I mean, yes, Percy isn't exactly the brightest kid I know, but really, this is just ridiculous ( ... )

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alice_pike August 30 2010, 20:51:19 UTC
I SHOULD PROBABLY STOP DOING THESE IN COMMENTS AND STOP SPAMMING YOUR JOURNAL.
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"I don't know," Rachel says, bringing Annabeth back to the present. "We could stage a game of truth or dare," she suggests excitedly.

"We can't even be sure that'd work, though, with these two," Annabeth says. "Maybe..."

"What?"

"Maybe I could talk to him. He's clearly not getting any of the hints."

"What about Nico?"

"We should wait. See if we can get through to Percy first."

Rachel shrugs. "Better you than me," she says, smug.

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The conversation does not go as planned.

Percy proves just as oblivious to all of Annabeth's hints as he's been to the whole situation, and while he'd been surprisingly open to the idea of non-exclusivity (Annabeth tells herself she'd been expecting that) she ends up spelling it out for him much more literally than she would have liked. She gets as far as "And I mean, if there's anyone else, Percy, I would be okay with that, all right?" before Percy cuts her off.

"But," he says, pausing. "there isn't anybody ( ... )

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lettersandliars August 30 2010, 22:50:05 UTC
OMG THE STOLLS AND EVERYONE BEING ATTRACTED TO LUKE AND FLUSTERED PERCY YES. SPAM AWAY!

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alice_pike August 31 2010, 03:41:40 UTC
Percy thinks about it non-stop.

He replays Annabeth's words over and over and over in his head, but he can't make sense of them. Yeah, sure, he'd never really bothered to look at boys in a sexual way--like she'd said, Annabeth had pretty much fulfilled his sexual attraction quota while they were off fighting for their lives (and for each other's) and saving the world. And that was working for him pretty well, and now that they finally had some peace, he didn't see the need to change that.

Except that it changed without his notice or permission.

He doesn't even know what he meant by the Nico comment. He supposes that he was just thinking of everything Luke wasn't, trying to dispprove Annabeth's point by bringing up someone he genuinely liked, someone who was worth his affection. He knows that it doesn't fit (that he doesn't see Luke that way anymore) but there's nothing else for it. He shrugs off the train of thought, but something else comes to him: the memory of their second day, when Annabeth was talking to Nico under the ( ... )

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alice_pike August 31 2010, 21:37:55 UTC
This doesn't go according to plan, either. Both Percy and Nico make admirable attempts to include Annabeth in their day's activities, but it just makes her more frustrated than usual. They go to visit Rachel in their free time before they have to teach the new kids sword fighting, but she refuses to talk to them until they (and Percy quotes) "Get their acts together." They share a confused look, and eventually make their way over to the arena to teach their class.

Percy's decided to teach them the disarming maneuver that Luke first taught him, and, as Luke did, give them a demo. Clarisse has come to watch the Ares kids, and she rolls her eyes at Percy when he calls Nico over to partner him.

"What?" Percy asks, affronted. "He's the best swordsman here--"

"Besides you," she cuts in, and Percy stops, mouth open. Clarisse seems to notice that she's just defended Percy's honor or something like that, and scowls at him, letting him continue ( ... )

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alice_pike August 31 2010, 21:38:10 UTC
They head back to the cabins when the lesson is over, and Percy swears he could uncap Riptide and cut the tension between them. The silence is heavy, and Percy's voice sounds too loud when he asks Nico to come back to the Poseidon cabin and help him take off his armor.

"There's a strap on the backplate I can't really reach," he tells Nico. "Jake said he'd work on it, but they've had a lot to do. There's hardly enough camp weapons and armors for all the kids here now."

Nico nods, and follows Percy to his cabin. Percy undoes what he can, and twists and reaches behind him to try and undo the bit right between his shoulder blades. "It's right--there," Percy sighs, giving up.

"I got it," Nico reassures him, but his hands are shaking and it takes him a few tries to get it off. Percy turns to take the plate from Nico, but once he's facing him neither of them move. Nico turns the piece of armor in his hands, looking at Percy's feet; he can hear Percy breathing, can feel Percy's heartbeat ( ... )

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lettersandliars September 2 2010, 20:55:20 UTC
So you are pretty much my favorite person in the world, I JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD KNOW. I died right about when Nico's hands started shaking. GUH.

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alice_pike September 3 2010, 22:52:58 UTC
:D I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's been really fun to write. I'll probably be MIA for a few days now that I'm back at school and settling in, but I definitely mean to keep working on it. ♥

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alice_pike September 12 2010, 03:38:33 UTC
Rachel stares at them knowingly for the next three days straight, and they both fidget under her gaze. Percy and Nico share awkward looks and Percy's never been uncomfortable with the fact that Rachel is actually the Oracle of Delphi until this very moment.

He doesn't see how Rachel could know (because really, doesn't she have better things to prophesy than his love life?) and it's not like he or Nico has mentioned it to anybody, but she smiles coyly at them whenever she sees them, and there's a conspiratoral glint in her eyes that worries him. But the strange thing is that Annabeth isn't acting any differently. Don't get him wrong, she's plenty cordial and always greets them, but she still leaves them alone more than is necessary and rolls her eyes at them more than is usual.

Things with him and Nico have pretty much gone back to normal, although there's still that thing between them--not just the memory of the kiss, because yes, there's that, but there's something else, too, something Percy doesn't know what to do with and ( ... )

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alice_pike September 12 2010, 03:38:59 UTC
The great thing about Percy, Nico thinks, is that he never has to say much around him. (The dead don't really talk much, you see, and Nico's learned more from them than just combat and warfare; when you have eternity ahead of you, they tell him, you learn to appreciate silence--the language of quiet company and the ability to read the atmosphere of a situation--and Nico's lucky enough that he doesn't have to die to learn death's lessons and that Percy understands that about him). Percy may be a little slow on the uptake sometimes, about some things, but he's good with emotions--he can intuit feelings like no one Nico's ever met, and even if he doesn't always understand someone's emotion, he knows what's there.

So he nearly goes crazy wondering how Percy's managing to keep himself together. Nico can't stop thinking about when Percy kissed him; besides that days-long (years long, Nico thinks it must have been, now) Mythomagic tournament at the Lotus Casino, it's the longest he's focused on anything, ever. He knows that Percy must ( ... )

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lettersandliars September 13 2010, 01:19:55 UTC
YOU ARE FANTASTIC AND I AM LITERALLY ABOUT TO WALK OUT OF THE DOOR BUT I NEEDED TO GET THAT OUT. Better comment will come later! <3

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