Let me start off by saying after reading your application, I think that you have a very strong personality. I also think you seem very, very cool. I respect and appreciate serving the country, and I agree that you don't see a lot of that represented in rating communities.
You seem pretty cute, although I'm not digging the club/dance attire - looks skanky to me, but then again, it always has - nor am I into your look in the second picture. I don't like the solitary streak in your hair or the way you did your make-up; either thing has never been attractive in my eyes. So that's just my opinion. I'll overlook my strong distaste for the clothes and just see the pictures for your body - which, btw, you keep in very nice shape! Good for you.
However, actually reading your application was very difficult for me. You need some grammar help. So many sentences were completely lacking structure. I actually stopped and re-read so many things, and I almost never have to do that. It could be that I'm very easily annoyed with the complete lack of
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Hmm. Well. Starting with the my grammar, it's always been bad. I don't try to hide the fact that I have poor grammar. No, I'm not saying I'm okay with that fact the I have a lack of education. However, what I am saying is that I'm confident enough in other qualities enough to be okay with it. I'm well spoken and well educated in the subject that means the most to me. I think it's clear that I'm into medicine and it's a subject I study day in and day out. I'll never know everything about it, things are constantly changing, but I strive to learn all I can possibly learn about it. Everyone's got their rough patches and imperfections, english/grammar happens to be mine. And you know, the things about imperfections is you can never actually be happy until you've accepted it, and well I've accepted mine. So, who's to say I couldn't go back and try to relearn it, fix my flaws. I'm sure I could if I set my mind to it, but I don't. I'm sorry to inform you, and if this bothers you for that I am sorry too, but I just don't like English/grammar.
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[Maint] Yes x2redlygalJanuary 9 2009, 02:46:32 UTC
Although I don't exactly agree with some of your points, you reacted maturely and argued your side of things without going nuts (or getting pissed).
I'm sure the news isn't exactly what happens over there - after all, the media is pretty liberal, and the liberal take on ANY war (reason or not) is that it's bad and we're evil for sending anyone over there in the first place. This is in no way me supporting the war, however I maintain my perspective on supporting the people over there that do whatever they can to protect our country and help others out.
I can tell you have a brain. Grammar is a big thing for me (and obviously big for most other people in the community), but not many people use proper English on the internet, anyway. I'll do my best to ignore it if you get in.
Re: [Maint] Yes x2twistedpleazureJanuary 9 2009, 17:19:18 UTC
Just wanted to thank you for thinking outside the box. I don't see it often, but when I do I note it. I probably won't be making it into this community, so I just wanted to thank you before I go. =]
Re: [Maint] Yes x2redlygalJanuary 9 2009, 21:05:41 UTC
I try, and thanks. A lot of people are close-minded, you are right.
You're right, I don't think you'll get in. Maybe it's for the best? Who knows. Thanks for applying, though. :-) Keep fightin' the good fight for everyone.
You seem pretty cute, although I'm not digging the club/dance attire - looks skanky to me, but then again, it always has - nor am I into your look in the second picture. I don't like the solitary streak in your hair or the way you did your make-up; either thing has never been attractive in my eyes. So that's just my opinion. I'll overlook my strong distaste for the clothes and just see the pictures for your body - which, btw, you keep in very nice shape! Good for you.
However, actually reading your application was very difficult for me. You need some grammar help. So many sentences were completely lacking structure. I actually stopped and re-read so many things, and I almost never have to do that. It could be that I'm very easily annoyed with the complete lack of ( ... )
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I'm sure the news isn't exactly what happens over there - after all, the media is pretty liberal, and the liberal take on ANY war (reason or not) is that it's bad and we're evil for sending anyone over there in the first place. This is in no way me supporting the war, however I maintain my perspective on supporting the people over there that do whatever they can to protect our country and help others out.
I can tell you have a brain. Grammar is a big thing for me (and obviously big for most other people in the community), but not many people use proper English on the internet, anyway. I'll do my best to ignore it if you get in.
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You're right, I don't think you'll get in. Maybe it's for the best? Who knows. Thanks for applying, though. :-) Keep fightin' the good fight for everyone.
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