Application

Jan 09, 2009 00:14

A short introduction:Hurricane Katreena!
new applicant )

application, stamped - rejected

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Sigh...sway. redlygal January 8 2009, 22:14:35 UTC
Let me start off by saying after reading your application, I think that you have a very strong personality. I also think you seem very, very cool. I respect and appreciate serving the country, and I agree that you don't see a lot of that represented in rating communities.

You seem pretty cute, although I'm not digging the club/dance attire - looks skanky to me, but then again, it always has - nor am I into your look in the second picture. I don't like the solitary streak in your hair or the way you did your make-up; either thing has never been attractive in my eyes. So that's just my opinion. I'll overlook my strong distaste for the clothes and just see the pictures for your body - which, btw, you keep in very nice shape! Good for you.

However, actually reading your application was very difficult for me. You need some grammar help. So many sentences were completely lacking structure. I actually stopped and re-read so many things, and I almost never have to do that. It could be that I'm very easily annoyed with the complete lack of ( ... )

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Re: Sigh...sway. redlygal January 8 2009, 22:56:52 UTC
Oh, and btw, thanks for the compliment on my hair.. I didn't even noticed that.

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Re: Sigh...sway. twistedpleazure January 8 2009, 23:36:37 UTC
Hmm. Well. Starting with the my grammar, it's always been bad. I don't try to hide the fact that I have poor grammar. No, I'm not saying I'm okay with that fact the I have a lack of education. However, what I am saying is that I'm confident enough in other qualities enough to be okay with it. I'm well spoken and well educated in the subject that means the most to me. I think it's clear that I'm into medicine and it's a subject I study day in and day out. I'll never know everything about it, things are constantly changing, but I strive to learn all I can possibly learn about it. Everyone's got their rough patches and imperfections, english/grammar happens to be mine. And you know, the things about imperfections is you can never actually be happy until you've accepted it, and well I've accepted mine. So, who's to say I couldn't go back and try to relearn it, fix my flaws. I'm sure I could if I set my mind to it, but I don't. I'm sorry to inform you, and if this bothers you for that I am sorry too, but I just don't like English/grammar. ( ... )

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[Maint] Yes x2 redlygal January 9 2009, 02:46:32 UTC
Although I don't exactly agree with some of your points, you reacted maturely and argued your side of things without going nuts (or getting pissed).

I'm sure the news isn't exactly what happens over there - after all, the media is pretty liberal, and the liberal take on ANY war (reason or not) is that it's bad and we're evil for sending anyone over there in the first place. This is in no way me supporting the war, however I maintain my perspective on supporting the people over there that do whatever they can to protect our country and help others out.

I can tell you have a brain. Grammar is a big thing for me (and obviously big for most other people in the community), but not many people use proper English on the internet, anyway. I'll do my best to ignore it if you get in.

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mod // No x2. giacarcrash January 8 2009, 22:50:19 UTC
Sorry. I'm such a grammar nazi, and I agree with Toni 100%: your app is difficult to read.
What you said in your favorites bothered me too.
Just because you haven't read a book in a long time doesn't mean that you don't have at least 3 favorites! I love books! :)
Hell, one of my favorite books is The Giving Tree and that's a little kids book. I haven't read that since I was in the 4th grade.

Oh, and you'd be really super pretty if you didn't make faces in half of your pictures. Just smile, it's where your natural beauty definitely shines through :)

But, thanks for fighting the good fight. I honestly wish I could pull all of you soldiers out of there myself.

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Re: mod // No x2. giacarcrash January 9 2009, 16:57:54 UTC
TOP LIKE 5 FAVORITE BOOKS.

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Re: mod // No x2. redlygal January 9 2009, 21:04:39 UTC
THE GIVING TREE WAS SO AWESOME! I loved that book as a kid!

But my all-time fav: Alexander and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good, Very Bad Day

:-D

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no skadooosh January 9 2009, 01:02:35 UTC
I'm sorry to say it again, but I honestly could not get through your application easily, and I feel that's how your posts would be as well. I'm a huge grammar Nazi, and I plan to be an English major, so that's just one thing that I'm really passionate about.

Another thing I didn't like was something that Gia had already said, the fact that you had barely any favorites. Books are another thing I'm really passionate about, and you didn't give any effort to that section of your application..

Okay, enough of the negatives, I think you're a pretty woman, and I'd like to see you in something other than the two extremes - your uniform and the club wear in a majority of your pictures. But hey, that's just my opinion, I can see that you like your style, and I understand that you like to party when you don't have to be sort of straight-laced at work.

Overall, I think you're a really strong person, but I don't think you're really right for here.

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Re: no twistedpleazure January 9 2009, 11:13:36 UTC
Hey thanks for your input. But as I explain to redlygal English and grammar just aren't my passion. You can't expect everyone to like the same thing. But also thanks for the compliments. Have a great day =]

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NOOO samcas January 9 2009, 01:09:49 UTC
Great. It's you again

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Re: NOOO twistedpleazure January 9 2009, 11:12:00 UTC
Sorry, I don't remember you but, thanks anyway.

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no, sorry miss_watson January 9 2009, 07:58:37 UTC
I figured you'd know better than to use this picture anymore.

I don't think you'd fit in here tbh. :\

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Re: no, sorry twistedpleazure January 9 2009, 11:09:59 UTC
Sorry you don't like the picture, but I can't change who I am for a community. But, thanks for your input. I still think you're the best!

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Re: no, sorry miss_watson January 9 2009, 13:35:45 UTC
Well I don't mean this in a mean way- but you're not changing yourself. You'd just be omitting one unflattering photo, dig?

Thanks. ♥ *^_^*

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