FIC- Friday Night Lights (Santiago, Tim, Julie)

[leobrat]

Title: Under The Cloak
Rating: r (yes, we've moved it along at this point, I think)
Word Count: 1,864
Summary: Julie Taylor is nothing like the Madonna (Part V in the Permission To Exist series.)
Disclaimer: I own nothing.

Comments

[1407graymalkin]

"Hey, Five-Nine," it sort of makes Santiago's skin crawl, that no matter who he's talking to, Tim Riggins always sounds like he's trying to pick someone up. He turns to his new teammate and fistbumps. LOL! Excellent Tim characterization.

I love the whole Santiago bit and how perfect your voice is for him and his little character quirks.

[leobrat]

Thank you miss! I'm so glad you're enjoying this 'series'!

[thatdudejoe]

Oh man, this was some good stuff. More more more !!

[leobrat]

I have the next four sections plotted out, just need time to write!

[afrocurl]

Aww! Poor sexually frustrated Santiago.

The fact that Riggins called him on that stuff also just made me giggle.

I can't wait to see where this goes from here.

[leobrat]

It's tough being a teenaged boy! I'm sort of getting to that obsessive fic point where I don't want to work or do anything else.

[afrocurl]

What a great icon! Classy.

[leobrat]

Thanks! hope27 makes most of my FNL icons, they're gorgeous!

[hope27]

Ahh, yay, more Juliago fic! Once again, I love it! How much do I love your Tim...

"Hey, Riggins." The boy looks even more out of place than Santiago does in scuffed boots and a tee shirt that's seen better days..."So..." Riggins continues, as if they'd known each other forever and this isn't the most awkward, weird thing, trying to make conversation with someone you don't really know in a place where you don't feel like you belong. "So, Coach has got me on this apology thing- he says I still owe a personal apology to anyone on the team. And I got to thinking, I don't think I've ever done a damn thing to you, and you weren't on the team when I got kicked off, so..."

Perfect Tim voice, and I love Santiago's thoughts.

And Julie and Santiago, what can I say, the more I read, the more I'm hooked! I'm glad that they're are back on speaking terms and that Julie is trusting him with a secret...and this:

Julie chews on her lip a little more and he wants to run his finger along that worried line, feel how soft it is. It's distracting him

[leobrat]

I can't wait for your icons! The more I write them, the more I love them too!

[leobrat]

Pssst....Would you be interested in doing coverart for a Juliago fic mix? (No pressure, you spoil me enough...And it would take me a bit of time anyways...)

[hope27]

Sure, I'd love to... :)

[k4writer02]

You continued the "permission to exist" series

[leobrat]

I'm obsessed with this series. It's a sickness. And it just keeps on getting more layered, because I'm tying in all these sub-plots that are canon from the show, and then twisting them to fit this little world.

Hee...You're the only one who's really picked up on the fact that Julie admitted that Noah is the creep Tami thought he was! I'm totally coming back to that- there's a lot between them to sort out now, and remember, Matt's in that class too!

Santiago is *clearly* very attracted to her (and who wouldn't be, the girl is beautiful), and very drawn to the innocent, pure quality Julie has, probably because it's different from anyone else he's ever known (I imagine), but what I love about writing them is that she doesn't come off as this virginal ingenue when I start hearing her in my head. They're actually very prickly towards each other and it makes everything more interesting!