In Love's Defense - Part 4

[lenageek]

Title: In Love’s Defense

Spoilers: Takes place after ep 101 (8x09) soon after Pepa and Silvia have announced their engagement.

Rating: R for characters we all love that may or may not be in peril - I ain’t telling yet! ;D

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia (¡El morena y pelirroja!)

Summary: As Pepa and Silvia look forward to their upcoming marriage, the

Comments

[slayergirl13]

I'm liking the story. Very good intensity and cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to more.

[lenageek]

Thanks for the comment and continuing to read slayergirl13! If I may ask, what part of the world are you in that you're reading this at 2:15am my time? :D Either that, or you have just as whacked out a sleep schedule as me! Haha!

[slayergirl13]

I'm in So. California. I just have a whacked out sleep, I wouldn't really call it a schedule, it's me trying to go to sleep and not being able to. Repeat that about 10 times before 3a-4a which is when I usually get to sleep, that's my sleep schedule.
I spend my awake time wisely; I get to read all the great posts on here, like yours, so it all works out;)

[lenageek]

Ah, your sleep schedule sounds like mine at times! I'm usually a 2am sleeper, tho it depends on what time I have to be at work - groan!

Yay for spending your awake time wisely and on the pepa_silvia community! :D

[swiftlyreloaded]

very entertaining
good stopping point indeed

[lenageek]

Oh good! I thought I'd have to duck raw tomatoes for doing another cliffhanger! Call it raven_bard's influence since she fills her PepSi fanfic with those! ;D

[swiftlyreloaded]

RIGHT! ha she does. well i guess just keeps me coming back for another dose! fan fics beat the real LHDP @ the moment NO Silvia BOO! =(

[lenageek]

Ah yes, the fanfics rock over the real show - I'll watch it next season to support Laura Sanchez, but I won't lie, it'll be really hard to do so. :{ It'll be devastating to see Pepa after the massacre.

[raven_bard]

JESUS CHRIST ON A GODDAMN CROOKED RAINBOW CRUTCH!!! You just STOPPED! WHY?!?! *hyperventilates* This is...you just...it's all...

*takes deep breaths....downs some Jack and coke*

This is payback isn't it? What the 2 something weeks of you not updating wasn't enough torture; you had to cliff us too? Meanie!!! *pouts*

But ok, ok...it was brilliant. It was realistic...the police talking stuff was awesome! And the tender moments between Silvia and Pepa...what Silvia said to Pepa was *dreamy sigh* Beautiful. Even in the face of a crisis, they manage to be all mushy sweet. Hope you're gonna update soon...the cliffy bout drove me half outta my mind. Update!!! *grins*

[lenageek]

Okay, I have to admit that it was 7am-ish and I'm half asleep in bed when I read your comment and I laughed my butt off, saying 'That's what you get!' I'm getting back at you! (But I say that in the sweetest and most respectable of ways - I still bow down to you and your superior writing style

[raven_bard]

*grins* Christ on a crutch is a fun phrase to say. There are so many blasphemy coated phrases that are just delicious! *laughs*

And who cares about the RL inaccuracies...it's your story, your RL! If I bothered with technicalities like that I'd go insane.

"Be careful, don't get drunk and comment - don't drink and dial!" ~ I learned my lesson...no more drinking and commenting. I've never gotten drunk and called anybody....yet. I've drunk texted a whole lot though. My msgs were gibberish. *laughs* Oh, oh, got another one! Don't drink and play pool. I once shot the ball off the table and it crashed into someone's drink. *cringe* It was baaaad. Then another time, I was holding the cue stick and trying (very badly) to demonstrate how Gabrielle in Xena wielded her staff. End result...bad. I won't go into it.

[lenageek]

Yeah, when I said the Christ on a crutch to imayfan, she asked where I picked up the phrase and I said I dunno, probably from some British film or something. We both agreed that it sounded like a phrase Lena Headey would say - I've heard that woman swear in front of me and boy did it sound sexy in that Brit accent - haha! Just about as sexy as hearing Laura say "Joder, Silvia!Yeah, I think trying to get the RL technical stuff in there, even if it's not correct is part of the fun - I just like trying to create tension/drama/angst - it's a fun challenge

[foot_print_1]

Chapter 4 has a nice balance, a nice sweet mushy moment, tempered with serious police elements. Not to mention that all your “mushy moments” are well written, which is another great accomplishment. They are always sweet without giving one cavities. :P I commend you!
But you just had to give us a cliffhanger didn't you? *pouts comically*
Seriously though, I really think this is a great fic. Keep on writing, please.

[lenageek]

Thanks for the lovely, detailed comment foot_print_1! Yeah, the mushy moments aren't too written out in detail since I just have an outline/notes of where I'm going with this. But sometimes the girls surprise me. I hope I can keep the balance up - the next part will have a lot of shifting POVs, so I hope to create a nice balance there between the characters while still having tension.

Yeah, I do have a few more cliffhangers planned tho - shh! Don't tell raven_bard since it's her influence that I have them in the first place! :D

[selinakris]

oh my god, of all the places to pull a clifie.. thats just mean!!
but oh so awesome can't wait to read more.

[lenageek]

Thanks! I plan to write faster this week so I don't leave you all in the lurch for too long! I'm not trying to be too mean, I swear! :D