Alive

[lemonademelon]

Title: Alive
Pairing: JaeChun
Genre: Romance, Angst
Rating: R
Length: Drabble
Disclaimer: I don't own DBSK :(
Warning: Smut

30.01.11 | Alive

I feel like shit.

Comments

[xsuju_addictx]

MY SPOT!
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

[xsuju_addictx]

OOOOKKAAAY, I THOUGHT THE 'I' IS JAEJOONG.
AND THEN AHH, ITS YOOCHUN.
IDK BUT I SERIOUSLY.
THINK THE FIRST PART OF THE FIC.
ITS REGARDING YOU AND 5.
IDK WHYYYY. I JUST THINK.
"WHEN SHE WROTE THIS, SHE MUST BE THINKING OF HIM."

BUT YES, ITS A DRABBLE AND JAECHUN.
AND I GOT MY FIRST SPOT.
OMG IM SOOO GOOD.

AND LASTLY.
IS THERE SUCH A THING AS THIS?
NOT FEELING ANY PAIN?
..........................................
^^

[lemonademelon]

..........
Why 5??? -___-

it's a nerve disease, not being able to feel things~ hehe a very rare one tho~

[tatofy]

that was kind of sad
but i liked it ^_^

[lemonademelon]

thankyou for reading! <3

[blocassimere]

ahhh~ *speechless*

is Yoochun having a health problem here? High pain tolerance? XDD

anyway, ahhh~ it's frustrating, not to be able to feel that 'someone's touch, Yoochun can't feel Jaejoong~ ;__;

but at least Yoochun can still hear Jaejoong's velvety voice, Yoochun can still see Jaejoong's beautiful face and Yoochun can stil smell Jaejoong's aromatic scent. ahhh~ it's angst, and i like angst <333

[lemonademelon]

You like angst?? ahaha glad you like theeem ♥♥

Yeah Yoochun's having a nerve system disease :( it's very painful not being able to feel right? :(

[blocassimere]

I ♥♥♥ ANGST~

awww~ i figured. that's too painful :(( Jaejoong is hurting too...

[lemonademelon]

Good, cos I mostly write angst loll xD

yeah both are hurting :(:( but they have each other so it doesn't matter anymoreee ♥♥♥

[ryther]

I think angst and JaeChun is unavoidable...because they usually need the hardships to realize how much they love each other and the fact that Yoochun is hurting emotionally is enough to let Jae know how it also pained him even when his lover couldn't feel.

Angst with a smutty+fluffy ending is my cup of JaeChun tea...thanks for writing~

[lemonademelon]

true, angst and JaeChun is unavoidable. Why do have that impression on them idk~

and thank you for reading ♥

[youngsoongi]

This was so amazing.
Seriously...
The emotions were captured perfectly...
and i doubt this is smut... it's just mentioned...
loved this :)

[lemonademelon]

thankyouu ♥

ah, not really smutty, but yea..just to be safe? loll

thankyou for reading :):)