Shadow 5/5

[lemonademelon]

 Title: Shadow
Pairing: JaeChun, HoMin
Genre: Romance
Rating: R
Length: Series
Disclaimer: I don't own DBSK :(
Warning: Language, Supernatural, Lots of conversations
Summary: Jaejoong has sixth sense, but never look at it as misfortune until he met Yoochun.

A/N: This fic is for 

Comments

[lemonademelon]

SPOT for xsuju_addictx :D

[xsuju_addictx]

OKAY, IT'S THE END OF THE FIC. *bawls*
BUT NEXT IS YOOMIN. *jumps*

FIRST OFF, MY COMMENT ON THIS PART!

SERIOUSLY WHEN JUNSU CALLED CHANGMIN AGAIN AND THEN CAN'T REACH, IDK WHY BUT I KINDA FEEL THE PAIN?
IDEK WHAT TO SAY, I MEAN. I CAN FEEL HOW HELPLESS JUNSU AT THAT TIME.
MY GOD, REALLY. YOU'RE GOOD AT ENDING IT JUST THERE.
:)))))

OH THE PDA! <3333
JAEJOONG CAME AND THEN SUDDENLY KISS YOOCHUN!!!!!!!
HASDGAS !!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3
AND YOOCHUN SLURPED? THE BLOOD, LMAO.
THAT PART WAS... AWESOME.
AKJDGAKJSGAKJFS AND AND AND !!!
WHEN JAEJOONG CONTROLLED YOOCHUN.
THAT WAS..... ASDHAGJF REALLY.
THE FATHER EVEN SURPRISED IM MORE SURPRISEDDD!!!
<33333333 GOSH REALLYYYY

[lemonademelon]

oh my. long comment is long -_____-

ah i thought the ending is total shit lmao I shouldve done better but glad you like it ♥

prediction
HOW DID YOU KNOW ABOUT CHANGMIN AND YUNHO? /sigh you mind reader -___-

kekeke but you still got some of your prediction wrooong *proud*

hmmm Junho with TOP?..................sequel? I'll think about it xD

Sorry no smut! maybe next time? xD

I ♥♥♥♥♥ You too!

[lemonademelon]

SPOT for blocassimere :D

[blocassimere]

OMG FIVE CONGRATULATIONS! :DD

ahhh what can I say? I love this so much <33 I'm happy for Jaechun, I'm more happy for G-Su :DD I didn't expect that, but they're cute together ^^ All have their mate's now... ahhh~ finally happily ever after :)

Yunho's trick. i know it already since the beginning :) idk how i figured it out but i just know that 'Yunho' is Changmin, and 'Changmin' is Yunho :D *pats shoulder* i'm so proud of myself XDD

i expect more Jaechun in the future from you? ^^ ahhh~ i'm quite sad right now because this is really the end but i enjoyed reading your story Five! :DD

*now goes to read Alive*

[lemonademelon]

Hey Third! ♥

Ah how did everyone find out Yunho's trick? *pouts* I should learn how to be more mysterious loll

Yes, more JaeChun coming, I believe~ :3

thankyou for readiiingg ♥♥♥ --> 3 hearts for you xD

[blocassimere]

Hey hey hey! ♥

You should learn more :)) start to think now and add it to your new fic okay? ^^ make it really really mysterious so nobody can predict it, not until you unveiled the truth. let's see if Mun can predict your mind again, the kid has incredible foresight XDD

ahhh~ 3 hearts *squeals*

♥♥♥♥♥ --> 5 hearts for you too :D

[lemonademelon]

SPOT for sab08 :D

[sab08]

so this is like a super duper late comment..
i'm really sorry dear. *huggles*

btw, i loooooooooooooooooooove the ending.. <3
and can you please write the gdragon/junsu scene?
pretty pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*

a pretty kind demon really is not fit to be a demon king. XD

and i really thought that yunho was the favored son.. hmmm..

heart broken junsu becomes desperate? >< *hugs junsu*
but hey, i'm happy cause you'll write their scene right? *grins*

XDDD

okay, so how late was i?

because of that, i'm going to try writing chapter 4 now for you. oh, how i wish ideas would pop into my mind..
i'm planning on looking at the story from yoochun's pov.
but hmmm.. idk about his feelings yet..
can you ask him for me?
the last time i checked, his *tries to remember*...
his hiding in your bedroom..
so can you ask him for me? XD

*hugs you tight*
sorry for being so late..
*leaves jaechun chocolate*

[lemonademelon]

lmao I forgive you cos you're writing me chapter 4 xD *huggles*

thankyou! poor Su, but he has GD now :3

writing their scene? o___o idk I'll think about it lmao I suck at writing smut ><

Oh Chun! *pull him from under the bed* Sab's looking for you xD

it's okay bb <33 *hugs*

[lemonademelon]

SPOT for my ninja youngsoongi :D

[youngsoongi]

oh dear xD
i was ready to go ninja and take a spot now xD
lol
ok
-goes to read-

[youngsoongi]

ok.
i really love the ending.
everyone is happy - JJ got Chun, Yun has Min and Su got GD xD
i sure hope you will write more stories...
really loved this :)

[lemonademelon]

sorry I beat you into it xD

you love it? really?? Thankyouuuu! ♥♥

A Yoomin fic will be next ♥♥♥ thankyou for reading :)

[chunonew_rx]

i really liked this ~~~~~
everyone got his happy ending
and gd and junsu ,,, i was so seeing that coming hahaha
nice job, love it ^^

[lemonademelon]

really? ah it was kinda predictable wasn't it? hehe thankyou for reading! ♥♥♥