Cupid
Title: Cupid
Pairing(s): DongSeob, KiWoon
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,887
Summary: In order to ascend into Heaven, Yoseob must come to terms with his feelings for Dongwoon.
A/N: More late night musings.
( I was his moon, his satellite, always present, faithful and unmoving. )
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH BEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
This was the cutest little thing I read yet sad. I mean, I teared up a little ;~~~~~~~~; it was...so beautiful...
Dongwoon found me-he woke me up every morning, bouncing on my bed and hilariously bellowing my name-and ever since that moment that he found me, he has not been the same.
Just the thought of trying to wake up your best friend in such a chipper, happy, bubbly demeanor...only they don't wake up...ever again...
We were very in tune with each other. That was my buddy… He confided in me, and I comfortably confided in him.
I knew every nook and cranny of his heart... I wish he could say the same for mine. I like how you mention every 'nook and cranny' because ..idk it's means yoseob knew every crevice, every itty bitty thing about dongwoon, it shows just how much seobiee loves wooniee.
Now that I’m dead, I am able to peer inside of and experience the truest cavities of someone’s heart. It is a gift of the deceased.
And looking into the looking glass of Kikwang’s heart, I can tell you that Kikwang loves Dongwoon.
Emotions of the heart have colors; whenever Kikwang is near Dongwoon, the very core of Kiki’s heart glows a dense coral. I feel it. I am overcome with it. It intensifies the longer they stay together. And as I watch and feel it do so, my spirit becomes quite humanly jealous.
Because I love Dongwoon, too. I was in love with Son Dongwoon. I am still very much in love with him. Even in death, love is inescapable.
But.
…
But…
But I never told him how I felt… I never told him how he made me feel. And it’s too late.
It’s too late for me. I’m dead. I cannot love him in this realm. I can’t give him what he needs as a soul… as a spirit. I should have done that sooner… while I was alive… while he could see me and I could see him.
But Kikwang… I don’t want him being like me, or making the mistake that I made. I don’t want him hiding his heart and feelings away from Dongwoon anymore. I don’t want him to be scared of love, or hold anything back from Dongwoon.
I really like how you incorporated feelings having a specific color, I love it! Not only does it add a vibe to the story but it allows the reader[moi] to see indebtly how Kiki feels. And how Dongwoon isn't feeling.
You are a creative genius! The entire concept of this is so different and surreal, showing that even in death souls feel and get jealous and want their loved one to be happy, the way yoseob wants dongwoon to be happy with ki kwang.
and then the 'taking over' ki kwang's soul to finally confess to wooniee and then wooniee...he was so happy...so happy!!
“But I don’t feel him, hyung. I’ve felt his presence before... after he died. I’ve seen him, too. I’ve heard his laughter. Before he died he would always touch my hair and I’ve felt him touch my hair just days after he passed. But now, I rarely even feel his presence. He left me,” Woonie choked, “...He left me.” my heart was cracking the more I read this ... and then
“...So long as there is an Earth, there will always be a moon. So long as you are here, you will always have me,”<,I> I don't know if you made this quote but let me just say it is beautiful. I absolutely love it. My favorite line perhaps. It brings the story together, even after dying Yoseob was with DOngwoon and in a way he always will!!!!
It was beautiful. Angst but in some sort of 'rainbow' happy way...I hope that makes sense. I loved this!! Bee you are amazing!!! ^_^
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maybe it's not angst though...oops...
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