You know, it's a whole lot easier to draw it right in the first place than to fix it after the fact.
Yeah, I'm trying to fix the fucking train panel from last week's page (which several people have commented upon, and not in a good way ... hahahahaAARGH).
What I'm going for is a train platform on the outskirts of a gritty (but not dystopic ... just kind of working-class) industrial city in the future. Sort of more, say, Chicago than Seattle.
*goes back to drawing board*
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