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Too In Love to Let it Go, Chapter 9

Apr 22, 2013 20:13

Title: Too in Love to Let it Go

Author: gingerandfair/lavender_love00

Genre: AU/Married!Klaine/future-fic

Rating: NC-17

Word count: 4300/200,000
Spoilers: none

Chapter summary: In which Kurt and Blaine meet their baby for the first time, Abby's heart breaks and Burt, Carole and Finn come to New York for a visit.

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Comments 5

Relationships.... lovesrabbits April 23 2013, 12:37:37 UTC

I love the interactions among the characters. The hospital scene;the Hudmel scene. The tears, the joy, the regard each has for the other. What is evident and what is subtle. Very realistic.

Re: Relationships.... lavender_love00 April 24 2013, 02:25:34 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad what I was trying to convey is getting through :) That's very satisfying as a writer!

Re: Relationships.... lovesrabbits April 24 2013, 02:35:52 UTC

I am loving this rewrite. You certainly are getting through. You are handling the emotional element extremely well. I absolutely cannot wait for each installment. It's riveting. I'm still laughing over 4 year old Kurt! You've captured that perfectly. It's all so true.

OMG..... whitesheepcbd April 23 2013, 16:34:45 UTC

Soooo many adorable moments with the new dads, and the Hudmels, but so much heartache for Abby. How do you know when you're a good writer? When you can make your readers laugh and cry in the same chapter. I sure did.

Re: OMG..... lavender_love00 April 24 2013, 02:25:58 UTC

Thank you so much :) I'm so glad you're enjoying this!