Snicked from Puel and others.
Pick a paragraph/passage of under 500 words from any story I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, or anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
Fic is at
athyn or
rose_in_winter.
*mopes off to sulk about having to go out in the dreary dull grey cold rain*