Seriously, you're being judged on the style of your writing instead of the content of it? I can't really understand that, particularly from a free class. Ugh, don't blame you for being depressed there.
IMO you're a great writer, Lar, so screw 'em all.
I miss having a baby around all the time. They grow up fast and there's a different kind of joy in spending time with a child then, but nothing quite can touch the sweet smell of fresh from the bath baby, one who doesn't want anything else in life than to be entertained - and to do the entertaining.
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And yeah, baby!smiles can make everything worthwhile. :D
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I've decided I need to take a video of Num's smile for when they head back home and I won't get to see him every day!
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IMO you're a great writer, Lar, so screw 'em all.
I miss having a baby around all the time. They grow up fast and there's a different kind of joy in spending time with a child then, but nothing quite can touch the sweet smell of fresh from the bath baby, one who doesn't want anything else in life than to be entertained - and to do the entertaining.
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