Comments | lar_laughs: FIC: Don't Turn Away (SP)

lar_laughs

FIC: Don't Turn Away (SP)

Mar 28, 2012 21:53

Title: Don't Turn Away
Word Count: 324
Rating: PG
Original/Fandom: Original - Streetlight People 'verse
Pairings (if any): none
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): none
Summary: a snippet of story using "Forest, Anticipation, Turn" as prompts

( Kilce's eyes go wide with shock and confusion... )

streetlight people, writerverse, original, 2012

Comments 4

rinkafic March 29 2012, 17:58:04 UTC

I wanna know what's at the library now. hehehe

lar_laughs March 30 2012, 02:35:07 UTC

I was going to point you here for the Library stuff when I realized that I don't think that I ever stated that she was IN the library. This is what I get for letting the story go for a couple of weeks! I'm loosing threads! Eek!

hhhellcat March 30 2012, 00:29:20 UTC

My first reaction upon seeing this last night was, "Eek! New SP fic!" Then I promptly fell asleep since I'm balls at dealing with LJ on my phone. I love that these characters are starting to connect now, that they're moving from their individual stories to interacting and making new ones with other characters. I'm also intensely curious about this Librarian and how what she's done has affected Tevan.

Some typos for you:

Two people, in the space of two week, have used that word in conversation.
Should be two weeks, I believe.

but it means something that she was person picked.
Need to fix this one, too. that she was the person picked, perhaps?

it's a heady enough feeling to see her through to the end of this strange expedition.
Capitalize the first word. ;)

lar_laughs March 30 2012, 02:31:09 UTC

Ah, can you tell I had twenty minutes to write this and get it posted for the deadline? *grins* Thank you for the corrections. I'll get them in the doc!