Fic: It's Not Quite Right (Parts 7&8/8)

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Title: It's Not Quite Right
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: John, Teyla, Ronon, Rodney, Jennifer, Amelia, Woolsey, AU!John, AU!Teyla ... (implied John/Ronon)
Rating: R for language in some sections
Prompts: written for the stargateland Bingo challenge

Summary: Set just after Enemy at the Gate ends... Beckett stretched his arms over his head. "I think I'

Comments

[mierke]

I love AUs! So excited to read this one :D

"You don't look like you're going to be alright." John hissed at him
I love your John characterization. It's so good.

It was Atlantis, poking and prodding at his subconscious, that was keeping him up.
I love how you're depicting her as a seperate character. She's so important to this Stargate series, that I believe she might as well have been a seperate character (just like Serenity in Firefly)!

"I just can't help but think that if O'Neil was still around, things would be different."

Well, wasn't that just a kick in the heart. John tried to think of a response but he was mourning a friend and nothing else seemed important.
Beautifully sad.

Maybe my favourite part of all was part seven. Woolsey is such a fascinating character, and I love how he muses on about how Atlantis and the people on it have changed his (way of) life.
"If you want to stay, you can stay. I will tell you that you will be as missed back in our original time as if you had died there. Your parents will have to be told

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I ADORE Woolsey and I became the tiniest bit of a Woolsey/Amelia shipper writing this. I do believe the sequel (as I kinda left it hanging) could turn me pretty firmly in that direction. They both kinda need each other.

Atlantis and Serenity are such cool "characters" to imagine. They bring such a cool comforting vibe to the stories they get featured in.

I'm glad the end worked. I was struggling to fit that word in and I was very, very tired. *grins* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!