Fic: It's Not Quite Right (Parts 7&8/8)

[lar_laughs]

Title: It's Not Quite Right
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: John, Teyla, Ronon, Rodney, Jennifer, Amelia, Woolsey, AU!John, AU!Teyla ... (implied John/Ronon)
Rating: R for language in some sections
Prompts: written for the stargateland Bingo challenge

Summary: Set just after Enemy at the Gate ends... Beckett stretched his arms over his head. "I think I'

Comments

[mierke]

I love AUs! So excited to read this one :D

"You don't look like you're going to be alright." John hissed at him
I love your John characterization. It's so good.

It was Atlantis, poking and prodding at his subconscious, that was keeping him up.
I love how you're depicting her as a seperate character. She's so important to this Stargate series, that I believe she might as well have been a seperate character (just like Serenity in Firefly)!

"I just can't help but think that if O'Neil was still around, things would be different."

Well, wasn't that just a kick in the heart. John tried to think of a response but he was mourning a friend and nothing else seemed important.
Beautifully sad.

Maybe my favourite part of all was part seven. Woolsey is such a fascinating character, and I love how he muses on about how Atlantis and the people on it have changed his (way of) life.
"If you want to stay, you can stay. I will tell you that you will be as missed back in our original time as if you had died there. Your parents will have to be told that you died as if you really had stopped existing. Your friends, many of them in this room right now, will be forced to mourn you."
Also, just as with John, your Woolsey voice is perfect.

John smiled. Any guy who could use the word groovy correctly on his first try had to be on the road to recovery. "Groovy. We'll just leave it that for now."
Heh :) The ending made me smile. Great story!

[lar_laughs]

I ADORE Woolsey and I became the tiniest bit of a Woolsey/Amelia shipper writing this. I do believe the sequel (as I kinda left it hanging) could turn me pretty firmly in that direction. They both kinda need each other.

Atlantis and Serenity are such cool "characters" to imagine. They bring such a cool comforting vibe to the stories they get featured in.

I'm glad the end worked. I was struggling to fit that word in and I was very, very tired. *grins* I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!