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[laguerita]

today i was bored in media and politics (its 3 hours long people) so i wrote a poem

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[daynapanda]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA AJAJAJAJAJAJJAJAJAJAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHHAA AJAJAJAJAJAJ
That was awesome! Screw nice poetry!

Just 2 things...
3rd line, 2nd paragraph it should be se acercó demasiado

3rd line, 3rd paragraph it should be just huyó, without se :)

AWESOME!!!
Totally made my morning ;)

[laguerita]

hehehe i am glad!!

i was gonna put se acerco for that line but it seemed to throw off the syllables.... but now that i think about it, syllables in spanish work differently so i could totally do it hahahahahaha...

im gonna fix it - - -

im glad you liked that one! :-D

[daynapanda]

It kicks major ass in my book :)

[laguerita]

ill dedicate my next piece to you!