i was gonna put se acerco for that line but it seemed to throw off the syllables.... but now that i think about it, syllables in spanish work differently so i could totally do it hahahahahaha...
hahaha... this is gonna sound totally random... but farmers here call the pigs by saying "su-eeeeeeeee" and when you wrote "su-weeeeeeeeeeeet" i was like MANDE?! ahhahaha but then i realized that i simply read it wrong hahaha
That was awesome! Screw nice poetry!
Just 2 things...
3rd line, 2nd paragraph it should be se acercó demasiado
3rd line, 3rd paragraph it should be just huyó, without se :)
AWESOME!!!
Totally made my morning ;)
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i was gonna put se acerco for that line but it seemed to throw off the syllables.... but now that i think about it, syllables in spanish work differently so i could totally do it hahahahahaha...
im gonna fix it - - -
im glad you liked that one! :-D
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