Okay fucking hell your beta's were right. Where's the rest of it?
I cheated and read the end first cause if it was too bad I was going to have to hold off reading it. bitchandjerk has met my quota of ripping my heart out and stomping on it in the past three days thank you very much.
I'll have a better comment tomorrow after I get off work and maybe sleep tonight.
Nope, sorry, that's most likely all there will ever be. I think what I wanted to do with this one was something different.
Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person. Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well. A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
Nope, sorry, that's most likely all there will ever be. I think what I wanted to do with this one was something different.
Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person. Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well. A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
Oh geez. I'm glad you warned us that we'd want more but wouldn't be getting anymore. That gave me time to prepare myself for the ending. Oh geez, both boys are just so incredibly broken. Poor Sammy! He just got utterly fucked by the system. And Dean's willing to do anything for Sam. He's got so much guilt. Really wonderful story.
Well every plot out there has been done before, but it's the author that makes each senario different.
I like that you didn't try to romantize Sam's lifestyle. He wasn't a happy hooker. He managed to survive, and learn how to continue to survive... but there's nothing romantic about his existance.
I agree. I mean the story could continue, but I think it ends perfectly fine here.
Not everything has to be wrapped up in a neat bow, stories don't always end perfectly, sometimes they're messy and unfinished, and I think this story is a perfect example of that.
Nope, sorry, that's most likely all there will ever be. I think what I wanted to do with this one was something different.
Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person. Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well. A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
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I cheated and read the end first cause if it was too bad I was going to have to hold off reading it. bitchandjerk has met my quota of ripping my heart out and stomping on it in the past three days thank you very much.
I'll have a better comment tomorrow after I get off work and maybe sleep tonight.
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Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person.
Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well.
A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
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*sobs*
Srsly, I enjoyed this tremendously and I'll just ... hope the muse strikes and you write more!
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Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person.
Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well.
A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
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Sammy, so fucked. But I liked writing his edges and coloring outside the lines of 'hooker fic'.
To take it further though, it felt like I was just wading through territory that'd been covered before by me or others.
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I like that you didn't try to romantize Sam's lifestyle. He wasn't a happy hooker. He managed to survive, and learn how to continue to survive... but there's nothing romantic about his existance.
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Great story, and I thank you for posting it. :)
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For like a year I wrote AU versions of the SPN pilot. I dunno what was wrong with me. "Threw Away the Sun" is another of those.
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Not everything has to be wrapped up in a neat bow, stories don't always end perfectly, sometimes they're messy and unfinished, and I think this story is a perfect example of that.
Well done.
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Hooker fic where the hooker kicks serious ass and is a fairly competent person.
Dean on a non-supernatural mission as well.
A monster-fic (I've never done one of those before).
The rest--it's kind of been done. They find John or don't. They fall in love. The brother thing causes some drama but doesnt end them.
If somehow I come up with a take on the next steps that doesnt feel like it's been done before I might write more, but for now, this is what it is.
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