Who We Are (32/35)

[ladygray99]

Title: Who We Are (32/35)
Author: ladygray99
Rating: PG13
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/David
Word count: 1,570
Warnings/Spoilers: Attempted Suicide and the after effects there of. See Part 1 for Spoilers.
Summary: Sometimes life makes you look in the mirror and if you don’t like what you see there are only a couple of options. - David comes home.
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[t_vo0810]

i just wanna draw big sparkly hearts all over this interaction:
“Okay. So I’ll buy you a beer tomorrow night.”

“I’ll probably cry so I’d appreciate it if you’d respect me in the morning.”

“I’ll do my best, man.”that is beyond perfection. i love bffs!colby and david. i really really really do. and that is the epitome of bffs, right there

[ladygray99]

I had to give David and Colby one more good moment together.

I'm glad you liked the dream bit. I think I actually rely a little too heavily on them. They're showing up in the next Whitman a lot as well but I guess as long as the don't get to weird or cheesy...

And feel free to send me anything. I'm always up for looking over fresh fic. You can share it on google docs if that's easiest.

[fredbassett]

“I’ll probably cry so I’d appreciate it if you’d respect me in the morning.”

Wonderful line :)

I don't think you're over-using the dreams at all. They've been an integral part of this story arc and they've worked very well for me.

[ladygray99]

:-) That's good to know.

[writergurl91]

I have a midterm that I should totally be writing right now, so I appreciate the short chapter which is absolutely fabulous by the way.

I feel like the dream was really sweet and that the Charlie/Amita sounds really interesting. and I love that Charlie and David get to have date night again. Charlie meeting David at the airport was absolutely the sweetest thing ever.

I love this chapter, just like I love everything you're writing. Here's sending good thoughts your way. Now I'm off to write essays and more essays.

[ladygray99]

Good luck on that midterm. I'll think good academic thoughts your way.

[msgrahamcracker]

I loved the little mystery of Charlie knowing where David was and when he was flying in; and the fact that Charlie didn't question David - was just there for him. I'm glad David told Colby everything - he needed to know - and, of course, it's nice that Colby still repects him. Ha Ha. Another great chapter, but, oh, I hate to see this end.

[ladygray99]

All things must end but that's what re reading is for. And I am thinking about a little prequel

[boymommytotwo]

"they didn’t keep him locked in the basement it was in fact the garage."... this made me snort, i almost woke the baby.

perfect transition.

[ladygray99]

Thank you.