OH MAN OH MAN. THIS STORY. <3333333 God, I fucking LOVE always-a-girl!fic SO MUCH, and this was just - god, this was SO FUCKING AMAZING, I can't even. I don't know where to START. I love the atmosphere, and the FEEL of it. I love Gee here so much - she's so unsure of herself, and clearly so AWESOME and BEAUTIFUL and I really love how we see her through Frankie's eyes, almost, and Mikey's, because she is JUST that clueless. <333
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"Maybe? Um, sort of? Mikey doesn't exactly date, but you guys-" Gee doesn't get any more words out before Frankie cuts her off.
"Oh my god, no. Gee, babe, I don't do dick."
*FIST PUMP* LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT
Their first kiss is SO BEAUTIFUL and I love that Frankie is letting Gee explore and GET there, because she got there a WHILE AGO and Gee just needs to catch up. LOVE that. <3333
Frankie's fingers curl into Gee's shoulder and she pulls her close, enough so their bodies touch, the soft rise of Frankie's breasts meeting her own through layers of clothing. Gee makes a soft noise and slides her other hand to Frankie's back, pulling until the press is a crush and they're necking.
LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOVE that moment where it just TURNS. <3333
The ride home is awkward.
*giggles* NO SHIT. I love how you handled that - it's always so hard to keep the tension going after a break in a scene, but you did it REALLY FUCKING WELL, and I adored the image of Mikey dragging Pete away. <3333
Also this:
"Your brother is kind of a slut," she says,
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Frankie's hands are in Gee's hair before she’s even halfway there, easing her legs open and Gee has to stop for a moment just to look because god, what a view.
*FLAPPY HANDS OF FLAP AHHHHH* YESSSSSSSSS that is SO PERFECT. The whole section of Gee going down on Frankie is SO FUCKING HOT, I don't know what to DO WITH IT, ahhhh, it's so perfect. *_____* Just just just. YES.
Gee rides it out, holding tight to Frankie's hip with her free hand, and not easing off. She works Frankie's clit, feeling it tremble under her tongue as Frankie slick flesh grips her fingers, and god, it's fucking intense. It's like she's coming herself, and she moans into Frankie's skin, sucking in air through her nose and Frankie's all she can smell.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"Fuck, you've got another one in you, don't you?" Frankie whispers, sounding delighted and turned on. This just about KILLED me. I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE
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DEAR GOD WOMAN THIS COMMENT. THIS SERIES OF COMMENTS. I've kind of been all *HANDS* about replying because I just don't know how to respond to something so EPIC. I mean GUH. This is amazing. THANK YOU.
It means a RIDICULOUS amount to me that you liked the story so much, because I know how much you love the mix. Hell, I know how much I love the mix, but I was so NERVOUS about writing this, because femslash isn't exactly my forte - hell female characters are not so much my forte - and like, I didn't even particularly set out to make it f/f, I just really wanted to write always-a-girl!Gee, because IDK, I guess SHE was kind of in my comfort zone to start with after having written her before with the whole Punk-Ass Threesome 'verse. So when I knew I had to write a female protagonist I started with HER
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(As I also loved Frankie coming to Mikey's defense re: general sluttiness in the scene before.)
Oh man, getting to write Scene!slut Mikey for this fic was SO MUCH FUN. I LOVE that characterisation of Mikey and even though the mix didn't call for a misunderstanding as such, once I got the idea in my head of Gee thinking Mikey and Frankie had hooked up I could NOT get it out of my head. (Even when I hadn't decided on Frank being Frankie I still had it in mind, because Mikey totally doesn't discriminate between pretty boys and girls.)
Of course Frankie wouldn't slut shame! More power to the promiscuous!
I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE EXCITING THAN SLEEP and there is a really gorgeous person RIGHT THERE, and just. You captured that SO FUCKING WELL.EXACTLY THIS. I mean, god that's the upside of F/F right? There's this quote that I can't find right now, but it's from some interview with Ellen and Portia where they
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"Oh my god, no. Gee, babe, I don't do dick."
*FIST PUMP* LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT
Their first kiss is SO BEAUTIFUL and I love that Frankie is letting Gee explore and GET there, because she got there a WHILE AGO and Gee just needs to catch up. LOVE that. <3333
Frankie's fingers curl into Gee's shoulder and she pulls her close, enough so their bodies touch, the soft rise of Frankie's breasts meeting her own through layers of clothing. Gee makes a soft noise and slides her other hand to Frankie's back, pulling until the press is a crush and they're necking.
LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOVE that moment where it just TURNS. <3333
The ride home is awkward.
*giggles* NO SHIT. I love how you handled that - it's always so hard to keep the tension going after a break in a scene, but you did it REALLY FUCKING WELL, and I adored the image of Mikey dragging Pete away. <3333
Also this:
"Your brother is kind of a slut," she says, ( ... )
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*FLAPPY HANDS OF FLAP AHHHHH* YESSSSSSSSS that is SO PERFECT. The whole section of Gee going down on Frankie is SO FUCKING HOT, I don't know what to DO WITH IT, ahhhh, it's so perfect. *_____* Just just just. YES.
Gee rides it out, holding tight to Frankie's hip with her free hand, and not easing off. She works Frankie's clit, feeling it tremble under her tongue as Frankie slick flesh grips her fingers, and god, it's fucking intense. It's like she's coming herself, and she moans into Frankie's skin, sucking in air through her nose and Frankie's all she can smell.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"Fuck, you've got another one in you, don't you?" Frankie whispers, sounding delighted and turned on. This just about KILLED me. I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE ( ... )
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It means a RIDICULOUS amount to me that you liked the story so much, because I know how much you love the mix. Hell, I know how much I love the mix, but I was so NERVOUS about writing this, because femslash isn't exactly my forte - hell female characters are not so much my forte - and like, I didn't even particularly set out to make it f/f, I just really wanted to write always-a-girl!Gee, because IDK, I guess SHE was kind of in my comfort zone to start with after having written her before with the whole Punk-Ass Threesome 'verse. So when I knew I had to write a female protagonist I started with HER ( ... )
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Oh man, getting to write Scene!slut Mikey for this fic was SO MUCH FUN. I LOVE that characterisation of Mikey and even though the mix didn't call for a misunderstanding as such, once I got the idea in my head of Gee thinking Mikey and Frankie had hooked up I could NOT get it out of my head. (Even when I hadn't decided on Frank being Frankie I still had it in mind, because Mikey totally doesn't discriminate between pretty boys and girls.)
Of course Frankie wouldn't slut shame! More power to the promiscuous!
I love that they just don't STOP, they keep going, and it's clearly one of those nights where you just can't sleep because everything else is SO MUCH MORE EXCITING THAN SLEEP and there is a really gorgeous person RIGHT THERE, and just. You captured that SO FUCKING WELL.EXACTLY THIS. I mean, god that's the upside of F/F right? There's this quote that I can't find right now, but it's from some interview with Ellen and Portia where they ( ... )
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