FIC: This Thin Veneer

[ladydreamer]

Title: This Thin Veneer
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Santana/Quinn
Rating: PG
Word count: ~3627
Warnings: none
Summary: Mercedes is suddenly ‘Hot Chocolate,’ and Santana can’t stand it.
Notes: Written for femslash10 for selenay936. Set during “Laryngitis.”
I actually love Mercedes lots and lots. No hate, just jealousy from the pov character.

Comments

[ithinkin3d]

D'awww! Your Santana has a mushy center under the bitchface meangirl I love.

OTHER THINGS

1. I like that Santana is observant enough to deconstruct Shoe's system and just be casually sarcastic about it. She and Mercedes are probably the only ones who think about this at all, IMHO. Maybe Kurt when he wants Rachel's Wicked solos.

2. Brittany quotes! <3. Sometimes I think Brittany should be fleshed out as more than just a vehicle for Gay Sharks - why are she and Santana friends, anyway? What is their friendship like? - but then I laugh too hard at the Gay Sharks and think fleshing will ruin the magic

[ladydreamer]

Unless they plan on writing her as a demon, I would hope there's something underneath!

1. I think you're right on this account, and if they spent any time talking, Santana and Mercedes would probably jive on that level. I doubt the race issue has occurred to Kurt much beyond wanting his girl Mercedes to get the chance to shine more! (Actually, in his "Rose's Turn" he does this move mocking Rachel, and while it is HILARIOUS, I think the anger is a bit misdirected.)

2. We talked about this in realtime format. :P

3. Honestly, as much as I complain, having a show that has writing problems is a nice home for a fanficcer to 'fix' things that don't make sense in canon. Femslash fixes so much…

It would be awesome, though, if they decided to give Santana some backstory and motivation, instead of just randomly using her as a prop for other story lines. It would be awesome if they didn't treat any of their characters as props, actually!

I'm sure Brittany has a last name. She just forgot what it is :(

[fresh_tart]

I love your writing! *sighs in delight*

She can’t say what she feels, can’t even sing what she feels because they don’t make smooth R&B songs about girls loving angel-faced knocked-up ex-cheerleaders.

But they should!

[ladydreamer]

They should indeed!

Thank you :D

[musicffyou]

I would just like to say that this needs to be continued please.

That is all :)

[ladydreamer]

I'm glad you liked it.

[xenachakram12]

YAYZERS!

I like how this is Q/S, but it still has Queercedes all over it. ♥

“Numbers have too many numbers” = Gay Shark lolololol

She can’t say what she feels, can’t even sing what she feels because they don’t make smooth R&B songs about girls loving angel-faced knocked-up ex-cheerleaders. - *heartclinch*

It so clever how you seamlessly weave this fic into the plot of the episode. lovelovelove! Good job, sweet!

[ladydreamer]

Haha. Yeah, that happens with an OTP. It sticks around, even when you're writing another pairing. But hey, the Queercedes is undeniable. It's just in how you choose to read it. :P

Glad you liked it, dear! This ep needed some femslash splainin'. :D

Stealing your icon now.

[leformat]

Aw, this was just lovely. Jealous!Santana is my favorite. Now whenever I watch this ep, I will imagine that the song is about Quinn. ^_^

[ladydreamer]

Jealous!Santana will kick everyone's butt! Hehe. I like rewriting things to suit my own evil purposes. I'm glad you liked it.