Fiction # 30

[ladybug_koozl]

Title: Cadence
Fandom: House, MD
Characters/Pairing: House/Cameron
Challenge: hc_challenge: Prompt #3, housefic50: 029. iPod
Words: 358
Spoilers: None
Rating: PG
Author's Note: This was inspired by a song I found online, Pete Tong's Serendipity. If you click on the link and scroll down the page to the 7th song, you can listen to it. :)

Comments

Serendipity(doo-dah ... serendipity-day ;-)

[drwilltx]

So ... this is what you were writing! Next time Cam will wear her shin guards when she runs!

Seriously ... well done - I'd've used "normal" or "regular" vice "normalized". Otherwise it reads well. You handled the delicate question of House's past and now impossible aerobic activities with sensitivity, but without excessive sentimentality.

Well done.

- Mondo

[ladybug_koozl]

Blechhh! Yeah, you're right! I changed 'normalized' to 'normal' and it sounds much better. Thanks!

:-) It only took me listening to the song 4 times to write this! LOL!