I need a good beta reader. A really good one. With lots of hard hitting constructive criticism. I decided that most of my story (One Glance) sucked and needed severe updating, but I'm worried I'm going to edit in mistakes or generally make an ass out of it, so I need someone who might remember the fic to help me along with it. The new version's prologue is nearly finished and I need someone to go through it with a fine toothcomb for me.
Thank you!
((Note, I will not be posting updates per chapter revamp here, but only changing them on my writing comm
neko_writes. I'll only post here when I have a completely new chapter to post up, although the fic may be unrecognisable by then if you haven't re-read through with the new changes...)
Old version of
One Glance if you don't know what it is.