The Wizards of Ceres: 16

[mikkeneko]

Title: The Wizards of Ceres, chapter 16 - Bloodthirst
Pairing: Kurogane/Fai
Rating: R overall, PG-13 in this chapter
Summary: In which Kurogane and Fai have a very painful but necessary conversation, and come to a meeting of the minds.

Author's notes: Fai gets a lot of flak from me, I'm afraid -- that's how I express affection towards my favorite

Comments

[mei_yanohi]

Holy moly. This chapter was AMAZING. Fay is going to be a JUGGERNAUT now, and I cannot WAIT to see it! AMAZING. Not enough words for how much I loved this. Perfect angst, perfect resolution. Mmmmm.

[mikkeneko]

Oh hell yes, there's not going to be much holding Fai back now. XD Seishirou had better watch out, his days are numbered now, muahaha.

[kenarbes]

Wow!

That was so cool! Fai and Kurogane merged and each learned what they needed to from the other. Kurogane was right, at least in part, about him having the power and Fai the knowledge. It seems Kurogane had both but was handicapped by his need for a sword to use his power. But it seems Kurogane was a piece of a puzzle Fai needed to be able to break free. I'd like it if Fai was able to break free from the demon, too.

Now, where, oh where, did he teleport them to?

[mikkeneko]

Yes, yes, that's it exactly -- Kurogane has strong magical power but has been conditioned from childhood to think he doesn't, to only be able to express it through his sword. Fai has no such mental blocks, so once he was able to tap into Kurogane's power, he didn't need a sword to use it. :)

Good question! You'll have to wait and see! ^_~

[maijame]

More.

Seriously you can't stop there.

[mikkeneko]

WANNA BET.

Seriously though I thought this would be a better stopping place than last chapter ^^;

[maijame]

Thing is, last chapter I knew it's got to get worse before it gets better. And I was anxious and not quite sure I wanted to know.

But now, I'm looking forward to see what's next.
Does that make me weird?

[mikkeneko]

Nah, not weird. I can understand wanting to get to the good stuff as soon as possible. On the bright side, the next chapter should be easier to write than the previous ones, since it IS all sweet stuff. :)

[michechu]

ajdgashdg I was having such a horrible day and I thought it could never be redeemed and then THIS.

THE AWESOME.

GO FAI.

And I really love the idealized view Fai has of Kurogane here. Frankly, it's just adorable XD

Write moar! I can't wait for the next chapter.

[mikkeneko]

Aw, sorry that you were having a bad day! :< Glad if I was able to help, just a little bit. XD

Yeah, Fai is head over heels in love with Kurogane... and now Kurogane knows. Kind of embarrassing for Fai, but it needed to happen. :)

[amythest_n_ice]

WooHoo! So totally awesome! Here's hoping that the WORST of their relationship woes are behind them now, and all they have to worry about is annoying rulers sticking their nebs in. Here's hoping he's teleported them to Nihon, or the first person they see is Yuki to lob them through that portal though, I don't think Ashura is going to be thrilled to see either of them at the moment.

By the way, in case you're wondering, I'm not a really awful reviewer, I usually reveiw on whichever site I get the update on first, and depending on the time of day you update, that's usually ff.net lol.

[mikkeneko]

Well... If they go to Ceres Ashura won't be too happy to see Kurogane, and if they go to Nihon Amaterasu won't be too happy to see Fai. Come to think of it neither Kurogane or Fai are really welcome in their OWN countries right now either. XD This is going to be tricky!

And yes, the two of them will pretty much have to be more honest with each other from now on. :) And I don't mind which site you review at, honestly!