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The Wizards of Ceres: 16

Jun 06, 2010 15:21

Title: The Wizards of Ceres, chapter 16 - Bloodthirst
Pairing: Kurogane/Fai
Rating: R overall, PG-13 in this chapter
Summary: In which Kurogane and Fai have a very painful but necessary conversation, and come to a meeting of the minds.

Author's notes: Fai gets a lot of flak from me, I'm afraid -- that's how I express affection towards my favorite ( Read more... )

fanfic - pg13, fanfic

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maijame June 6 2010, 23:27:32 UTC

More.

Seriously you can't stop there.

mikkeneko June 6 2010, 23:30:07 UTC

WANNA BET.

Seriously though I thought this would be a better stopping place than last chapter ^^;

maijame June 7 2010, 14:49:20 UTC

Thing is, last chapter I knew it's got to get worse before it gets better. And I was anxious and not quite sure I wanted to know.

But now, I'm looking forward to see what's next.
Does that make me weird?

mikkeneko June 7 2010, 16:01:23 UTC

Nah, not weird. I can understand wanting to get to the good stuff as soon as possible. On the bright side, the next chapter should be easier to write than the previous ones, since it IS all sweet stuff. :)

maijame June 7 2010, 16:36:36 UTC

Cute ( ... )

maijame June 7 2010, 16:41:14 UTC

Since you wrote it twice maybe you actually meant "shift" not "shirt"? My dictionary doesn't know it, so I'm not sure. Maybe it's some specialized vocabulary?

mikkeneko June 7 2010, 16:49:45 UTC

Hi, just a quick response here... Yes, I actually meant 'shift' rather than 'shirt.' (#17 in here.) It's a sort of old-fashioned term, refers to a simple unbelted long shirt or sleeveless dress. You might be familiar with the term "night shift" which is like a nightgown.

maijame June 7 2010, 16:53:19 UTC

Oh yes. And thank you!^__^

maijame June 7 2010, 16:52:14 UTC

Google says it's something between Unterkleid and Unterhemd. There isn't an exact word for it in German, because it's referred to as Unterkleid, which could also mean some other garments.
Interesting.

But now I have an image in mind. And a lot of unneccessary lines in my comments... forgive me.^^

mikkeneko June 7 2010, 20:00:56 UTC

I am hoping that readers will find the sweet stuff at least as enjoyable as the horror and the drama. :) There's been a lot of both of those in this fic so far -- but really, I figure it's about the right time to give them a break and let their relationship gel a bit. The story is almost over -- just one or two chapters left to go. If it helps, though, a sequel is planned in the works, one that focuses more on Syaoran and Sakura -- and that will start the drama cycle off all over again!

I think Kurogane is not used to seeing himself as an object of admiration. ^_~ He doesn't seem to have much in the way of romances at home, with either women OR men. That Fai thinks he is sexy as hell is something that embarrasses him, but he'll just have to get used to it. *grin*

Fai probably knows more about Kurogane than Kurogane does about him even now -- but he hasn't really had time to process it yet, to sit down and think about what all it means. He'll figure it out later.

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