Before the Dawn - Chp. 7

[kurokitsune09]

TITLE:  Before the Dawn
RATING: PG to PG-15ish?
PAIRING/FOCUS: Jongho (Main), Cheundong/Krystal (sub) [others to be determined]
GENRE: ...adventure, au, romance?
NOTES: [[Okay, it started out great...then turned a little weird because like two bunnies jumped ship unexpectedly. So if it doesn't make sense, I'm super, duper sorry. ^^U

PLOT AND CAST 

Comments

[yaisa_forehba]

Yay yay yay yay yay update :D sorry I'm late -school occupies my whole time D:

OHHHHHHHHHHH not a fighting scence but an AWESOME explosion!! Jjongie is poooowerfuuuuuuuuuuuuuullll!! *shriek* I like I liek~ xD moahr I'm really excited hahaha
awesome, awwwwwesome!!!

Jjongie was a slave? ..poor dino..=(

love this story :DD

PS: sorry for this crappy comment xD

[kurokitsune09]

haha. I get the whole school thing. I just started my second year here and didn't have much time this morning. ^^

Awesome Jongie right? *huggles Jonghyun*

I think that so far, you're the only person who noticed the slave bit. No one else mentioned it yet. Everyone seemed to love my Taemin though. ^^

I think the slave thing, at least Jonghyun's past might be explain in the next chapter or one of the others like Sulli or Luna and Taemin's involvement will probably be explain too. ^^

Not a crappy comment at all. ^^

[yaisa_forehba]

yeah school ~.~ but I just have to squeeze JongHo in between xD

Yeah so awesome, it got me really excited and waiting for the awesome fighting scence you promised xD *huggles Jjongie with you* -wish I really could- :3

Yeaaaaaaaah I noticed, that he sometimes drifts away you know like spacing out..xD so I really wanted to know what happened...and baaam he was a slave..for a moment there you got me..xD I thought maybe he was raped or something, 'cause he hates being touched you know^^

looking forward to your explantation..'cause to be honest sometimes I get confused xD you know...like I just NOW checked that Taemin is speaking in another language with Cheondong..xD I know wtf right? sorry v.v haha xD maybe I spazz to much about Jjongie being powerful haha xD

btw~ I loved Taemin too! He wanted to protect Jjongie :3

I'm still spazzing about that explosion! man you got me too excited xD hope I can sleep tonight xD

[kurokitsune09]

ZOMG!! How'd you know!?! Well, he wasn't raped persay...at least, i don't think my plot bunnies and puppies are going to do that to Jjongie. (i hope not. I don't want to die by jonghyun fans)

Jjongie does space out a bit, and he's a little bit off his rocker isn't he? ^^ aww,but i think my readers love him anyways...I wants to like, lock him in my room and just hug the life out of him. ^.^

I hope I can get an explanation out soon. I don't want you all to wait. Did you know that there were 20 days between chapter 5 and chapter 6? I felt so bad. *cringes*

Powerful Jonghyun is love. so that's fine. Lol. taemin is very protective. I believe that where the explanations are going to go, Taemin probably either would have saved Sulli first or Jonghyun. So he's more protective over them...that and he likes Sulli. ^^

omomo, I don't want to you not sleep. Then you won't be able to stay awake during the day. >.

[yaisa_forehba]

hrhr I know a lot! jk jk xD
I'm glad he wasn't, it would really hurt to read...(I'm not so good with angst ~.~) but I definetly wouldn't kill you :'D maybe kidnapp you and give you a pc and let you write more JongHo xD sorry :'>

YES he is :D and I really love him hehe.
You just gotta let me in with the hug-time!

really?! thats a lot of days xD but I wasn't in from the beginning -just recently got into fics- *sigh* what did I do before that to satisfie my OTP-obsession? I day dreamed xD

Hehe I knew he likes Sulli! tsk tsk Taemin..you gotta hide it better :D so could read you teehee~

then you should write action soon xD :P nonono don't worry :D I won't faint 4 hrs sleep are enough..if it doesn't keeps up the whole week ^^

[kurokitsune09]

KIDNAP ME?!?! Will you pay for the classes i miss then? haha. jkjk. I love Jongho although I didn't write them a whole lot before. I read a lot though. ^^

I will let you in on the hug time. Because Jonghyun is adorable!! And well, our Dino-Jonghyun right?

Yeah. I felt so bad because my brain wouldn't work with me. >.< So I hope I can update soon. HOORAY FOR DAYDREAMING!! <3333

Taemin was really obvious wasn't he? lol. 4 hours of sleep, in one night? If you say so. Do sleep more kay kay? I don't want to lose a reader so soon because she fell asleep at the computer. ^^ (you are a she right?)

[yaisa_forehba]

aaaaaw what classes? I'll bring you Jjongie :D he can teach you! xD
I wanna write too! but my confidence is under 0.001% xD

aw Dino-Jonghyun like a bling bling star in the dark world~ xD so cheesy sorry haha

not good! sometimes a brain needs rest too :D and not just sleeping..but resting..xD
Yeah...if you daydream the weirdest ideas pop up haha

He sooo was obvious!
kay I promise :P if I read your fics they have to make sense right? so my brain has to work ^^

Yes I'm a she..xD you too right? :O
Btw~ are you an unnie?? ...I always wanted to call someone that...*sigh* but I'm always older..xD

[kurokitsune09]

hm....Chemistry, Chinese, English, history, and chem lab---wait. You'll bring me Jongie?! Then I'm totally taking all the classes in the world so he'd have to stay and help me! *gigglesnort*

Cheesy, but very accurate. ^^ Dino-Jonghyun is totally a bling bling star. ^^

My brain did rest. It rested for like 2o days. And I totally agree daydreaming gives you the weirdest things.

Taemin was really obvious. Well, to the reader and maybe Cheundongie but not to Sulli, who's a little bit oblivious. lol.

I am a she. But I'm a 91-er so I don't know if that makes me a dongsaeng or an unnie to you. I have two dongsaeng right now. my Minho, Alicedelusion and Yisey. ^^

[yaisa_forehba]

Chinese? you're learning chinese? like seriously?? xD man I envy you!!

meh..I'm just learning some spanish..still learning english (so forgive me for some foolish mistakes, I'm not a native speaker)..and at home if I have time korean..well I try that is xD

Yeah she totally is! But Taemin also is..for not seeing her blush xD

Then that makes me an unnie...I'm born in 88
well then hi dongsaeng (if I may) or should I call you something else? like give me something..xD or you like "you"?

[kurokitsune09]

Yuppers. Totally learning chinese. ^.^ You're still learning english? I thought you were a native speaker. You type so well. ^^

I think all kpop fans want to learn korean. Just so it'd be a lot easier to talk to people when we *ahem* stalk them on the streets. ^^

Taemin is a bit oblivious too. And They're like both oblivious dorks right? ^.^

And dongsaeng is fine. Course, so is Vicky and Kuro or something. I answer to most things.

would you like a spot in the next chapter post? I don't mind saving one for you. ^^

[yaisa_forehba]

whoa, isn't it like..difficult? you know..the most difficult asien language? xD how long are you learning now? is it in school? so awesome..the first thing I did when I enrolled in my new school (just a week there, it's a school for languages btw) I asked if there was any chinese or korean classes..but unfortunately they don't have any.

you really think? well..my pronunciation sucks haha xD glad you can't hear me..or it would blow you from your chair xD
But it does feel good to get that compliment from a native speaker ( I assume?)

Well I got to this language 'cause of kpop...but I wanna go to korea..and teach there..or something like that :D maybe teaching english hehe^^

They are! So, a couple made in heaven~

Ok then hi dongsaeng.

If you really don't mind saving one for me! You are the first one to do that for me :D

[kurokitsune09]

native speaker...enough. American Born. I'm an Asian American so for the moment, Chinese isn't that hard since I get exposed to it at home. I'm taking the first year course at my University right now and It's alright.

awww. Well I hope you find a school that does so you learn more languages Unnie! <3333 that's alright about pronunciation. my parents have horrible pronunciation and grammar.

Aren't they? SulTae is one of my OTPs. Although so is JAebum/Taemin...but then there's also Jaebum/Taecyeon. And then like Taemin and Jaebum are in quite the pickle so I made it all better by making SulTae/TaeliTaecJae my odd, not explored OT4. Still trying to see how that works. lol

HAIII UNNIE! And totally don't mind. ^^

[yaisa_forehba]

Ah I see!

I hope too. What would we do withouth languages? We would be so primitive. Fascinating. aaw you're such a good dongsaeng ;^;

My parents suck at that too! They can't even speak german good enough..and they live like 40 years here *sigh*

You got a lot of OTPs. I like. I got a lot too! JongHo of course, then there is JooMi and JongKi *sigh* Hongki with his dorkiness and Jonghoon just awesome :D but an 2pm pairing..I never read anything about them..never dared to...I'm worried..I might never see them in the same light again xD but if I had to choose someone it would be either Chansung/? or Junho/? ..maybe you can recommend somethin? :O

Then I'm counting on you! YAY at my first spot :D

[kurokitsune09]

heehee *giggles like the child i am...sorta*

JooMi?! Maybe I'll throw the Luna-Mir odd thing that I was thinking of and do a Joon/Mir side thing. ^.^ Jongki is awesome. They're so dorky and they make such a cute couple. ^^

It's okay. They're dorky enough that I think fanfictions should change how you see them. YOu might just see them a little bit dorkier though. ^^

Chansung or Junho? hmm...you could always read the Chanho pairing. It covers both of them. I'm personally more of a Chansung/Jinwoon (2AM) person but I read ChanHo too.

Should you start reading 2pm fics, Inorae, the lj community is always a good place to start. ^^

[yaisa_forehba]

hehe I often am a child myself!

I just recently got into JooMi..and they are awesome.

OMG don't get my hopes up..but I guess the other guys enjoying your fic (and maybe Luna/Mir? as odd it may be.) would kill me if they found out I was the source of that idea! *shivers*

mhhm~ Chanho..guess I'll try that :D
and maknae-couple! cute! definitely gonna try that one!
Thanks for sharing that information xD gonna check that community out!