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fuyukoi August 9 2013, 22:22:54 UTC
Koichi’s face, previously open and friendly, instantaneously transformed into polite disinterest. “Merfolk?” he said stiffly. “Surely not. Isn’t that just a harmless tale for children?”

NOW IS NOT THE TIME, KOICHI, DO NOT MAKE ME BITCHSLAP YOU

Koichi had a faraway look in his eyes as he gazed over Hideaki’s shoulder and out the window. “Humans are the only creatures with eternal souls,” he said softly.

I know there is a backstory here and I swear to God I am going to poke you for it for eternity BUT RIGHT NOW I MUST FLAIL HELPLESSLY FOR I AM CONSUMED BY THE FATE OF TAKITSUBA \\\o\\\ ////o///

Tsubasa would fade away after this lifetime and Hideaki would go through his future lives with half of a broken soul, aimlessly adrift with an incurable ache in his heart for all of eternity.

This made my heart ache ;___;

I love that you show that Takki needs time to make this decision and it's not something he decides at the drop of the hat. It shows that he's scared too, it's so realistic and believable ♥

He examined everything that ( ... )

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fuyukoi August 9 2013, 22:23:08 UTC
“No fair of you trying to sneak it in while I was falling asleep,” Tsubasa added reproachfully. He attempted to look stern but the effect was ruined by his wide grin.

Hideaki grinned back, cheeks starting to hurt a bit. “Then I promise to say it again and again to make it up to you,” he said loyally.

“Apology accepted,” Tsubasa murmured, kissing him lightly on the nose.

Oh, these two ;____________________;

The look of wistful hopefulness in Tsubasa’s eyes was enough to make Hideaki’s heart skip several beats. He scooted closer, touching their foreheads together, bridging the small gap in between them, unable to bear looking in Tsubasa’s eyes but needing to be close to him. “We don’t have the right parts to make one ourselves,” he said softly ( ... )

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inocchiroo November 11 2013, 05:17:12 UTC
I LIKE READING YOUR COMMENTS. TIS LIKE THE CLIFF NOTES VERSION OF THE FIC. *CACKLES*

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