Koichi’s face, previously open and friendly, instantaneously transformed into polite disinterest. “Merfolk?” he said stiffly. “Surely not. Isn’t that just a harmless tale for children?”
NOW IS NOT THE TIME, KOICHI, DO NOT MAKE ME BITCHSLAP YOU
Koichi had a faraway look in his eyes as he gazed over Hideaki’s shoulder and out the window. “Humans are the only creatures with eternal souls,” he said softly.
I know there is a backstory here and I swear to God I am going to poke you for it for eternity BUT RIGHT NOW I MUST FLAIL HELPLESSLY FOR I AM CONSUMED BY THE FATE OF TAKITSUBA \\\o\\\ ////o///
Tsubasa would fade away after this lifetime and Hideaki would go through his future lives with half of a broken soul, aimlessly adrift with an incurable ache in his heart for all of eternity.
This made my heart ache ;___;
I love that you show that Takki needs time to make this decision and it's not something he decides at the drop of the hat. It shows that he's scared too, it's so realistic and believable ♥
He examined everything that he had pictured his future to be before he met Tsubasa - king over the land with a queen by his side and heaven’s willing, a swarm of children and grandchildren to keep the palace halls bright for years to come with laughter and smiles. Juxtaposed against the idea of having Tsubasa near him - now that he knew what it was to love someone - his previous vision paled in comparison. His heart already felt shattered and his life meaningless with Tsubasa gone.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is just beautiful. I need synonyms for beautiful but anyway. Oh, Takki. Oh, them.
Grateful, Hideaki crawled on top of Tsubasa and nestled his head in the crook of his neck, the tears falling faster now. The echo of Tsubasa’s heartbeat, strong and steady, against him was the most marvelous thing he had ever experienced. With Tsubasa humming soothing sounds in his ear and his arms wrapped securely around his back, Hideaki was lulled to sleep again.
It's kind of ridiculous how much I love them and how much I love how you write them, but I do T_T <&&&&&&&&&&
“If you don’t want to live in the palace, that’s okay. I can help you find someplace else, wherever you want. Or if - ” He paused, choking up as he tried to force the words out. It would also be Tsubasa’s choice should he want to end his life.
D: That escalated quickly D:
Oh man, awkward UST is one of my absolute favourite things in the world *________________________________*
By the time the washcloth crossed his chest, brushing gently across his nipples, Hideaki felt lightheaded and it was all he could do to keep from turning around and smothering Tsubasa with kisses.
Hello *_______________*
...I FORGIVE YOU FOR THE COCKTEASING IN THE PREVIOUS PART, I AM A HAPPY ATHU NOW *__________________________________*
“You only get naked in front of me from now on,” he declared stubbornly, one hand moving up to twist itself into Hideaki’s hair.
IN EVERY LIFETIME, IN EVERY UNIVERSE ♥
with a grouchy Tsuyoshi, called in as extra reinforcements and precaution, watching over the proceedings.
TSUYOSHI HATES YOU FUCKING EVERYTHING XD ♥
The smell comforted him, another tangible reminder that Tsubasa was alive.
NOW IS NOT THE TIME, KOICHI, DO NOT MAKE ME BITCHSLAP YOU
Koichi had a faraway look in his eyes as he gazed over Hideaki’s shoulder and out the window. “Humans are the only creatures with eternal souls,” he said softly.
I know there is a backstory here and I swear to God I am going to poke you for it for eternity BUT RIGHT NOW I MUST FLAIL HELPLESSLY FOR I AM CONSUMED BY THE FATE OF TAKITSUBA \\\o\\\ ////o///
Tsubasa would fade away after this lifetime and Hideaki would go through his future lives with half of a broken soul, aimlessly adrift with an incurable ache in his heart for all of eternity.
This made my heart ache ;___;
I love that you show that Takki needs time to make this decision and it's not something he decides at the drop of the hat. It shows that he's scared too, it's so realistic and believable ♥
He examined everything that he had pictured his future to be before he met Tsubasa - king over the land with a queen by his side and heaven’s willing, a swarm of children and grandchildren to keep the palace halls bright for years to come with laughter and smiles. Juxtaposed against the idea of having Tsubasa near him - now that he knew what it was to love someone - his previous vision paled in comparison. His heart already felt shattered and his life meaningless with Tsubasa gone.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is just beautiful. I need synonyms for beautiful but anyway. Oh, Takki. Oh, them.
Grateful, Hideaki crawled on top of Tsubasa and nestled his head in the crook of his neck, the tears falling faster now. The echo of Tsubasa’s heartbeat, strong and steady, against him was the most marvelous thing he had ever experienced. With Tsubasa humming soothing sounds in his ear and his arms wrapped securely around his back, Hideaki was lulled to sleep again.
It's kind of ridiculous how much I love them and how much I love how you write them, but I do T_T <&&&&&&&&&&
“If you don’t want to live in the palace, that’s okay. I can help you find someplace else, wherever you want. Or if - ” He paused, choking up as he tried to force the words out. It would also be Tsubasa’s choice should he want to end his life.
D: That escalated quickly D:
Oh man, awkward UST is one of my absolute favourite things in the world *________________________________*
By the time the washcloth crossed his chest, brushing gently across his nipples, Hideaki felt lightheaded and it was all he could do to keep from turning around and smothering Tsubasa with kisses.
Hello *_______________*
...I FORGIVE YOU FOR THE COCKTEASING IN THE PREVIOUS PART, I AM A HAPPY ATHU NOW *__________________________________*
“You only get naked in front of me from now on,” he declared stubbornly, one hand moving up to twist itself into Hideaki’s hair.
IN EVERY LIFETIME, IN EVERY UNIVERSE ♥
with a grouchy Tsuyoshi, called in as extra reinforcements and precaution, watching over the proceedings.
TSUYOSHI HATES YOU FUCKING EVERYTHING XD ♥
The smell comforted him, another tangible reminder that Tsubasa was alive.
Agh why is your writing perfect ;_;
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