Fic: The Tie [21/66]

Nov 11, 2009 12:06

Title: The Tie [21/66]
Pairing: Kris/Adam [AU]
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4,100
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.  I own nothing.  None of this happened.

Warnings: This story involves character struggle with trauma and PTSD and may contain material that is triggering or upsetting to readers.  Graphic sex in nearly every chapter.  Language ( Read more... )

fic: multi-chaptered, rating: nc-17, type: au, author: scorpio_15

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retrochic_21 November 11 2009, 20:32:04 UTC
Why do you do this to me?! Every time you post a new chapter, especially one with MIND-BLOWING smut, I'm in public. My face is beet red right now, and I'm squirming in my seat because I think I literally wet my panties. That combined with the fact that my mouth is just hanging open, out in the air, and drool rolling down my chin. I must be such a pretty picture to the people around me.

My brain is surely a pile of nothing right now. It just melted right out of my ears and is lying at my feet with no way of ever being repaired. Like seriously the chills that are running up and down my body at this moment are over-taking ever bodily function possible. And I'm definitely incoherent as of right now after that table sex, because GOD DAYUM BB!! Seriously, how does your mind come up with these things?! I mean Adam in nothing but boots, a leather thong, and a whip. ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?! I just can't picture or fathom that without completely going slack and just like melting off my seat. Hands down, you are the QUEEN of sexytimez!! ::bows down:: Your scenes provide so much fuel for the fire, that I'm pretty sure I will have the best night of sleep I've EVER experienced tonight. ::sighs:: ::fans self::

And even though I say I'm incoherent, you know that's not actually a possibility for me. I have to go ahead and leave you the ridiculously long comments that are my trademark. Besides the impossibly AMAZING and INCREDIBLE and MAGNIFICENT table sex, I really love the beginning of this chapter. Other than the couple of flashbacks we've seen him go through, this is the first time we see how much his trauma has physically affected him. Not only did he faint and had to be taken to the hospital but he's literally clinging to Kris as if this is the last time he'll be alive. Adam's so afraid of Kris leaving his side at any point that he's resorting to giving up his control over everything. I love that Shelia's teaching Kris how to deal with it and help Adam through it though. That has to be a really important step for Kris, since he'll be taking over and be the main person there for Adam at all times now. I also think that what Shelia said to him, about taking care of himself at the same time, is a really important suggestion for Kris to follow. Because if he doesn't take care of himself too, he's going to get so overwhelmed by Adam that he's going to start resenting him and that would NOT be good.

This chapter just accidentally my entire day. Seriously, I don't think I'll be able to do anything after reading this. You slay me bb. You slay me GOOD!! Please don't make me wait for another chapter. You just like upped the dosage on my drug with this chapter. I need the new one like.....yesterday. Lol. But seriously can NOT wait for the next chapter!! Oh and by the way:

YOU OWN MY SOUL!!♥

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scorpio_15 November 11 2009, 20:49:16 UTC
Oh girlie, I love your long-winded, emotional, thoughtful and sparkly bouncy comments so much! :DDD re: the sexytimes...it's ALL their fault! If Adam and Kris and their out of this world hottttness would leave me alone for just ONE minute... LOL! I am SO glad that you enjoy them as much as I do bb :)

It will indeed be a fine balance that these boys will have to strike, figuring out how to take care of themselves while loving and supporting each other!

LOL you have NO CHOICE but to wait for more bb, but I'll try not to make the wait too long.

ILU and your shiny graphics! <33333

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norosegarden November 11 2009, 23:29:19 UTC
YES. scorpio15 is trying to kill us despite protests to the contrary. Such lies!

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