I need someone to look over my story for the
mpregbb. My normal person can't do it in time. It's a Kradam Mpreg story set in the middle ages and has some NC17 material. It's about kidnapping, forgiveness, and romance. :) I need someone to look at the flow/tone of the piece. Grammar/Spelling isn't all that important, I can edit that myself. I just need an outside reader to let me know if it sounds good and makes sense. If you can read and critique a 12,000 word story by January 28, I would be really thankful! :D