#20

Jan 20, 2011 11:18

Five requests:
1. 2ne1, minji/bom, dance studio, any rating [Filled]
2. YG Family, Taeyang/Teddy, " ICE AMERICANO OR DIE", any rating
3. yg family, hyunsuk/eunjoo, babysitter, any rating [Filled]
4. YG Family, Teddy/CL, "these cookies taste like garbage", any rating [Filled]
5. taebin (1tym)/se7en, phone call, no porn [Filled]
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filled #1 mildtigers February 6 2011, 03:30:38 UTC
rated pg

there's something stiff about the way she moves.

"kind of like her expressions" thinks minji. but aloud she says, "okay that was pretty good."

bom turns to minji, her front bangs laced in sweat.

"really? i thought i needed more practice...?"

the lilt in bom's voice indicates that she's unsure and self-conscious. it's so different from the bom unni during voice practice that minji wants to hug bom to her chest and just tell her that she's perfect the way she is.

not that bom needs any help. but bom's breathing hard and panting enough for the two of them. minji smirks and shakes her head.

"you did really good for today. i think we're both tired, right?"

bom tilts her head considering what would happen with more hours in the practice room. but in the end, bom agrees and they exit the dance studio with damp training jackets and sweats.

the building is pretty dark because everyone's gone home except for teddy, who's blasting music from his recording room. the hallway leading to the exit is narrow and the place fills with the humidity from bom and minji's perspiration.

"hey wait" says bom from behind minji.

minji turns around and... finds herself with a face full of bom unni.

bom steps closer with those huge eyes of hers regarding minji's face. there is a delicate feminine grace to bom's fingers and they come up to minji's cheek slowly. minji doesn't know why but she closes her eyes.

minji feels bom's nails stroke the sweaty wisps framing minji's face. minji's blood pumps so loud she feels like she's in the middle of a particularly powerful dance routine. it's thumping straight through her heart, to her neck and in a second now, she's going to feel it rush to her face.

"okay, there we go. there was just something in your hair."

minji opens her eyes. she feels like she's been cheated out of something that could have been wonderful. bom smiles at her from further down the hall.

"what's the matter? aren't you coming?" bom asks.

minji clears the throat that's been closed up for a while.

"uh, sure. yeah, i'm coming. just a minute."

but minji knows it'll take longer than a minute for this feeling to disappear.

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Re: filled #1 cranperryjuice February 14 2011, 05:39:21 UTC
I like this! :D You've captured the sweaty, exhausted post-dance-practice atmosphere very well. And I can totally relate to Minji here, being young and naive and projecting ~MEANING~ into something that turns out to be totally unimportant to the other person. I think anyone who's had a hopeless crush knows exactly how that feels. :) "Cheated out of something that could have been wonderful" is a great way to put it.

Your take on Bom was great as well - I love her IRL for her wide-eyed, awkward flakiness, and it was easy to imagine her doing everything you wrote. :) Thank you! <3

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Re: filled #1 mildtigers February 14 2011, 23:33:54 UTC
ngl, I love Minji because she's so sweet but so fierce at the same time. and GOD YES, "projecting meaning into something that's unimportant to the other person" is totally what i meant/was going for. She doesn't even know she's charmed by Bom yet. and Bom doesn't know anything. Haha.

Happy V-Day!!!

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