Round 2: how not to run away from home (the america song)

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Title: how not to run away from home (the america song)
Team: Future
Rating: R
Fandom: SHINee
Pairing: Jonghyun/Onew
Summary: In between the marshmallows and gummy worms, it was impossible for Jonghyun not to fall back in love.
Author's Note: many thanks to lib for holding my hand throughout all of this while i freaked out like a total loser. :)

Comments

[woocheeks]

Oh gosh, I really, really, enjoyed this.

“Jonghyun?” he asks, cocking his head.
“The one and only,” Jonghyun quips with a grin, holding his arms wide open. They stare at each other for a moment. Jinki raises an eyebrow. Jonghyun gives an annoyed grunt. “Well, are you gonna give me a hug, or what?”
Their whole meeting was completely lovely and you really captured their... essence, I guess. Their relationship is casual and maybe a little confusing (for them) but altogether the characterization was great and it was really, really adorable.

The story unfolded slowly, pacing was great, and overall? Well done!

[acrosstherug]

oh, this was really nice to read. ♥ I like the... child-like feeling Jinki gives off here, the way he's so much more free now? it's really heartwarming to read. And the slight resentment he feels when he's talking about all the things he had to do for the band before? yeah i found that to be really hardhitting for me.

also, jonghyun here. i like how he seemed so... i guess shocked at the unexpected burden of continuing alone. it just seems so him to me i cant even explain i myself. this was really lovely! n_n good job :)

[starlitbright]

This was really cute :) I like how Jinki and Jonghyun are so comfortable around each other even after the silence, and especially their differing choices post-SHINee -- very them.

[aussie_rose]

Awesomely awesome!

[snakes_gift]

This is so lovely! I'm so glad they ended up together. Thank you for writing.