ANONYMOUS KPOP HET WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

[aoza]

ANONYMOUS KPOP HET WRITING FEEDBACK MEME

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[aoza]

i post fic at a number of places but for k-pop, my work can be found in ichinori and my asianfanfics profile. here is a masterlist if you prefer.

i welcome any and all concrit. it's been so long since i've written anything so i'm bound to be lacking once my schedule frees up and i'm able to write. preemptive crit may help wonders. :)

ADVICE TO MYSELF

[aoza]

(.... because no one's leaving feedback....)

find time to actually write and don't delete what you've actually written because you don't think it's good enough after an initial editing read

RE: ADVICE TO MYSELF

[kagamiwa]

i actually spluttered slightly

Re: ADVICE TO MYSELF

[aoza]

no one wants to concrit me :(

[aoza]

you're a remarkable writer. imo, your greatest strength lies on your usage of second person POV. i've never read someone who can write that POV as well as you. i guess this skill of yours is what magically transports your readers to your stories: you pull them in and make them feel as if they are witnessing the scene with their very eyes. you have also established yourself as a very adept angst writer and i think a lot of people will agree to that. however (and this is where my actual concrit comes in), it would be nice if you could explore other genres as well. i personally think that angst is the easiest genre to write so one can elicit a reaction; but then again, it takes a lot of skill to receive similar response for feel-good stories (esp here in lj where most readers are also writers, and thus, less susceptible to fall for cheesy over-the-top fluff stories like those plaguing aff

[aoza]

Bless you. This is fantastic crit. ♥