time, ticking on me

[withoutchange]

time, ticking on me [1/2 3]
4,045 pg-13, (jessica-centric, jessica/donghae)
highschool!au it's about the people you meet along the way. 
a/n: inspired by garden state. except, the boy was supposed to be all dark and broody. it didn't work out that way.

Comments

[miliy96]

excited for part two

[withoutchange]

i'm glad! thank you for reading (:

[bollywoodrecord]

I wrote a super long comment that I was very satisfied with and then I pressed backspace and LJ went to the previous page and it was all deleted. Stupid Internet. -_-

You know, I'm not much of a HaeSica shipper, but you wrote this, so I had to read it, and it was just... Amazing. I can honestly say I am excited for part 2. :)

In most fics, Krystal is portrayed as Jessica's little sister who lives under her shadow, but you reversed the situation to fit a high school girl's life and it honestly turned out perfectly.

Her younger sister has a lot of potential that they can't afford to waste, not like with her anyways.Even though it was just the first couple of sentences, it started off Jessica's life as... Not meaningful, but worth something, that no one could see. And she wasn't just the isolated blonde

[daisukissu]

i love your review on this story! i have to say, most of the things you said were what i also felt but i couldnt put them in words. thank you for sharing your thoughts! :)

and i have to agree, this must be one of the best fanfics withoutchange has ever written. cant wait for part 2!!!

[bollywoodrecord]

Thank you. *bows, is honored

:)

[withoutchange]

;____; ♥ SO NICE.

[natsuberry]

okay if i didn't have to prepare a report to be presented 6 hours later i will most definitely read your fics.

i adore jessica in this- she's so.. idk, jessica? or what i think how she should be. donghae also comes off as this ideal guy from the block and ugh, the chemistry ilsfm

the flow, smooth. feel it in jessica's point of view. can't wait for part 2 ♥

[withoutchange]

awww, thank you so much!

[withoutchange]

and hyukjae ♥

[oyesungmin]

I like this. Jessica's thoughts and how she feels, how Donghae comes in randomly but at the right time. And Taeyeon is adorable :3
Looking forward to part 2 :)

[withoutchange]

thank you! i really appreciate it!

[thyluvlyname212]

i LOVE how super odd & different Jessica is here!!! and how Donghae is so well... pursuing her :P hehe

[withoutchange]

ahhh, i hope i didn't bend her personality too much ahaha. but thank you! <3