Comments | koutenki: happiness is uncharted

withoutchange in koutenki

happiness is uncharted

Feb 21, 2011 15:02

happiness is uncharted
2406 w, pg-13 (luna-centric, luna/minho, luna/onew, krystal/minho)
after she tries to jump, no one really knows if they're happy.

( the first time it happens, she finds her eyes flutter open to a boy with black hair. )

fandom: shinee, ♥ : krystal/minho, ♥ : luna/onew, Ξ : withoutchange, ♥ : luna/minho, fandom: f(x)

Comments 34

jinkibumiminho February 21 2011, 21:47:04 UTC

This is lovely and sad, and I'm so glad you found a way to make a happy ending!

withoutchange February 26 2011, 17:57:51 UTC

thank you ♥

luv4yen February 22 2011, 00:24:36 UTC

OMG! I LOVE THIS! SOO Much! It's so perfect in so many ways! I'm going to mem this! That's how beautiful it was (:
Oh please do write more!

withoutchange February 26 2011, 17:58:05 UTC

i like hearing that people actually mem my works. thank you!!!

happymint February 22 2011, 00:28:38 UTC

This is amazing, and perfect. The way you write is, aughhh. I love it.

I love onew/luna so much so dskjfhjkdhfs this fulfills my needs for today :D

now back to homework /cries

withoutchange February 26 2011, 17:59:07 UTC

onew/luna = *hearts; i usually ship onew with taeyeon, but i approve of both.

lol yeah, i always distract myself from hw with writing or reading fanfic x_x thank you though ♥

violetrosie February 22 2011, 01:06:53 UTC

I really like your characterization of Krystal in this--I feel like a lot of writers make her very one-dimensional, and you took her way beyond that. Beautiful work, as usual^^

withoutchange February 26 2011, 17:59:37 UTC

aww, thank you. i adore krystal beyond belief, maybe because she's my age. i don't know. but thank you thank you thank you ♥

cinnabun11 February 22 2011, 02:07:12 UTC

I love the windmill metaphor
and I love your writing! Very gorgeous

withoutchange February 26 2011, 17:59:47 UTC

thank you! :DD