let's play house (3/3)

Feb 27, 2014 22:51

let's play house (3/3)
~ 6095w, m, (nana/jaejoong) - heirs AU, faux cest (think rachel/young do) I part i part ii.
“I like surprises but only when you’re naked and not trying to steal my wedding invitation.”

■ dedicating this to all jaenana shippers, esp. my dear writer friends harues and uljima
■ mini soundtrack thingy at the end of post

Nana’s beautiful enough to lead a generation of princesses. )

Ξ : douc, fic: let's play house, *short, fandom: dbsk, ♥ : nana/jaejoong, fandom: after school

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devilgirlmaria February 27 2014, 21:11:20 UTC
OMO so cute I really adore all the tiny details

this is my ultimate fave

"Nana’s a creature of despondent, lives in dull silence and smear lipsticks on bed sheets like a trademark of her love for him. She’s a trained liar; doesn’t matter if it’s on the spot or well calculated, she can tell them fake tales without blinking. There’s a coldness that’s born and raised inside her body, an infectious poison that runs in her blue blood.

A girl’s a flower and when no one’s there to see, she’s writhing a little more than the day before. Nana anticipates the future she’s fated to live, sells her happiness to dollar bankers and hopes youth last long enough for her to love the only beauty she owns: a boy in a man who can only belong within her bedroom walls."

and this is so pretty

"Nana sits at a round table towards the back, taking in the overview of the room - velvet red wallpaper contrasting with forest green on the roof, chandeliers hanging from it like frozen raindrops."

my forever love for pretty, poetic prose, visual imagery and details haha

also I really adore the last two scenes with nana and the cigarette and when they run away and their in the newspaper haha

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douc March 9 2014, 03:50:52 UTC
omg I wish I could write better pretty, poetic prose tbh cause that's all that would be in my fics lol

I'm glad you like the last two scenes, they were probs my fave to write for this part and thanks so much for your support both on here and aff xx

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devilgirlmaria March 9 2014, 06:55:02 UTC
OOOOO ME LIKEY THE SOUNDS OF THAT *___* and awwwwwwwwwww your welcome sweetie I will continue to support you <3

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