chasing pavements

[withoutchange]

chasing pavements
~ 5600 w, pg-13 (kystal/onew, jessica/onew, jessica/jonghyun)
you don't expect to know who you will fall in love with.
a/n this fic is for my one year anniversary since i have been on livejournal. i hope all of you enjoy it ♥

Comments

[bollywoodrecord]

i feel like such a creeper, always first on your fics, but i swear i just checked my inbox after i finished watching city hunter. happy one year anniversary! i'll come back and properly comment later :)

[withoutchange]

Hahaha, thanks <3
don't worry bout it, I don't think you're a creeper.

[bollywoodrecord]

OKAY I'M BACK. super late, i know >_<

first, i just wanted to say that this was totally random. i would've never pinned you to right onew/krystal. when i first looked at the pairing, i was just like... whoa. but you ended up writing it really well. idc how onew's character is written, unless he's like, a complete douchebag, because usually he's just so sweet and fliffy. so him + jessica + intimidated of krystal = <3.

He blinks, "How old is she?"

"Eleven."

What the fuck.

I love this. I love this so much.

JONGHYUUUUN. Why is he just so amazing? I don't really care how his character is written, either, because he fits everything. It's really only Jessica and Krystal that are sometimes hard to get down, which is why this is so amazing. The Krystal/Onew is cute. Kind of strange, but really, really cute. I think I could really like them if, you know, I wasn't planning on keeping him for myself and/or if I'm feeling generous, Seohyun too

This is wonderful, as always, Jesa. Thank you for writing ♥

[bollywoodrecord]

*write, not right

omg epic fail -.-

[douc]

I OWN THIS SPOT

[withoutchange]

Yes. Yes you do ♥

[withoutchange]

Oh. The liar game fic is turning into a long ass three shot.

[douc]

I AM SO LATE BUT ASDFSFGHFFJHKJ WHY ARE YOU MAKING ALL OF US SHIP NEW OTP AGAIN??? WHY? IS THIS LIKE YOUR ANOTHER SECRET TALENT?

I actually love, love the fact that they knew each other at such young age. I'm not a big fan of 'childhood' kind of plot line so I'm really surprised that I enjoyed that part of the fic. And the age gap in this fic, didn't seem to matter at all!

Also, I have always enjoyed reading your jung sister related fic so that was definitely a plus to the whole thing. I don't know, instead of some complicated plot, you went with a really simple one which I really like after coming home from a tough day.

And WHAT? This ended up with a happy ending (omg, is this really you, jesa?)LOL

Flawless job as always and happy 1st anniversary /hugs you

[happymint]

IT'S 1AM ON A SCHOOL NIGHT, SO I'M CLAIMING THIS SPOT.

[withoutchange]

LOL. That's my school sleep schedule tbh

[happymint]

LMAO, oh really? anyways, I'm more sane now and I finished all of my homework almost n______n.

I really, really liked this. a lot. tbh, I never saw Krystal or Onew together but I couldn't help but LOL when Onew was so shocked when he found out she was 11. cracked me up. it was so beautifully written (like everything else you write, heh.) lovely piece and I'm on the edge of shipping Krystal/Onew (argh!!!!!)

plus, it made me happy that everyone had their own special ending ^^ plus jessica & jonghyun will always be together. no exceptions, hehehehhee.

[withoutchange]

i am happy you liked it! i was worried a lot of people would think it was weird bc yeah, she's eleven xD yeeees, ship them! haha. peer pressure!

just kidding :D
i ship onew with the world.

thank you for reading &hearts oh, i also love your writing, too.

[vibranthue]

ONEW/KRYSTAL! ♥ saving this spot first :3 /brb reading

[withoutchange]

:D

[vibranthue]

Took me enough to read this. Phew. I was about to read it after watching City Hunter and Jiu but I forgot then I wanted to read it at 3AM and I fell asleep. Great, don't read this

All the pairings here are lovely, seriously. But this time, for Jinki/Soojung, I... I can't. Geez, it's the best piece of them ever ♥ you did it great! And happy anniversary for you also♥

[withoutchange]

is city hunter good? O:
and aw! thank you <3

[scarredknees]

THIS IS SO GREAT. ♥ i loved how from the start you sort of saw krystal having this weird connection with jinki and it was weird and bitchy and oh, she's eleven, lol, how great is that. and the progression of their friendship and everything was awesome, really. five years don't matter! it was just weird was she was eleven and he was sixteen, lol. blah blah blah i'm just rambling now. my first sentence still stands. this is amazing! such a good read, thank you for writing this, it made me all happy on the inside. :3

[withoutchange]

i LOVE your icon.
thank you so much! and yeah, five years does matter a lot when you're 11/16, but when you're 20/25 it looks better, hahaha.