the breakfast club

Jul 30, 2011 11:39

the breakfast club
5,034 w, pg (sunny/jonghyun)
she was a mix between an updated version of a high school princess and mother Godzilla.
a/n: I wrote this for the kpop_het competition which I came 3rd with ~whoo. But truthfully, I'm not happy with this at all and struggled with writing this a lot. Anyways, if you see any mistake (eg. lee as kim) - do tell me ( Read more... )

Ξ : douc, fandom: c.n. blue, fandom: snsd, ♥ : sunny/jonghyun

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bollywoodrecord July 31 2011, 04:50:06 UTC
YAAAAAY.

omg this was all kinds of wonderfulness, i love love love it. honestly, i didn't really know what was going on in the plot towards the beginning, except sunny was the cousin of sooyoung, who is getting married, jonghyun is one of sooyoung's many servants, and sunny and jonghyun are not friends.

buuuuut, then it gets to the point where sndjdjdksos happens and sungmin comes into the story and i'm just thinking hell to the no. sooyoung and sunny would not fight over him. but, you write it so that happens and i want to cry inside because sunny just looks so perfect with sungmin that it's like what the hell, how are those two not all over each other?

but sunny looks good with almost everyone cheery, dammit, which makes sense because she doesn't like jonghyun. since the beginning of the fic, it's been said: lee jonghyun and lee sunny are not friends.

and then stuff happens and really yuri, you rock my socks BECAUSE JONGHYUN attempts to LEARNS HOW TO COMFORT <---- makes my life rh. i love this forever. and the ending was honestly just perfectness, in my eyes. i, truth be told, do not see how you are not satisfied with it because this is one of your best pieces. memming this forever :) thank you so, so, so much ♥

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