time, ticking on me [3/3] 4635 w, pg-13 (jessica-centric, jessica/donghae) highschool!au it's about the people you meet along the way. a/n: finally. it's done.
1) I hate you for your amazing writing skills 2) this made my day ♥ 3) thank you for not making this a complete heart break /throws confetti
I disagree with you, I love how this 3 shots ended. I have enjoyed every single seconds of reading all three of them and the fact that this ended with something to think about. It wasn't a complete happy ending but it wasn't the 'end' either. Another thing about this is that, I seriously held my breath when Jessica said 'I love you' first and not Donghae. That just made it a lot more special.
Wow, what else can I say? I love absolutely everything that you write but this, really has got to be one of my favorite. The way Donghae and Jessica and those other side characters are written is perfect and right on the spot.
Thank you for sharing this with us again! Memming this ♥
firstly, I MISS YOU. A LOT. guess what? I AM ON SUMMER BREAK. I'm finally free and it is amazing ♥
secondly, i love minah.
and i love you too, i'm so glad you read through this whole thing. it took me forever to write, but idek. i wrote this up at 3 00 am after watching my sister's keeper lol, so i was in an angsty mood. but, for the sake of haesica, i decided not to make it super angsty (although, i was EXTREMELY tempted too.) but i am really glad you read this yuri ~ it makes me super happy. i really appreciate it!
I just finished reading it - slightly late from my spot, yes, I know - and am having an incoherent spazz attack. Will have to leave a proper comment later.
I would write a super long, three page comment, but there's something I have to say about almost everything in this fic, so that would be kind of pointless XD
First, the Taeyeon-Jessica relationship. I almost died when Jessica started crying that last day of school. She seemed like such a loner, so reserved and kept to herself, that it was surprising that she even let Taeyeon in that far.
decides to cry first, let it actually show how much a month of friendship can mean to her; how much Taeyeon means to her.
I couldn't help but quote this because dfkadf JESSICA. You write her so well. Taeyeon is such a sweet person, and I guess she kind of broke into this outer shell that Jessica had built around herself and her school work. I think, even more so than Donghae and Krystal, Taeyeon really made this permanent impact on her as a friend
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The first part of Time, Ticking On Me was really angsty. It centered on Jessica being empty and distant from the reality she is living in. Until she met Donghae, who added a bit of color in her monochromatic world--splashes of blues and yellows and reds, and little by little, the rainbow--until she can already live in colors.
This continued until the next chapter, and by then her life literally changed. she gained new friends that turned her silence into laughter; her alone-time into "happy sundays." i'd like to say it was actually my favorite chap out of the three because it had angst in the background (jessica was still leaving after everything that will happen) yet it had a mix of romance, fluff, sincerity and friendship; and of pure, innocent, first love. this was the part where jessica, although she was against it, allowed herself to fall, where she allowed herself to be free of the chains that held her back from enjoying the past 3/4 years she had spent in that place. I can maybe relate to this that's why I liked it the most
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I just had to say that because HaeSica will forever hold a special, special place in my heart and I don't care what haters say because a love as beautiful and that was as innocent as theirs should be held on to forever ♥
I am incoherent because this is lovely and neither of them expected to fall for each other too fast / too deep, but one just had to admit it or the silence will forever break the beauty that is their feelings T___________T I love you for writing this and I love HaeSica forever ♥
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/brb flailing
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2) this made my day ♥
3) thank you for not making this a complete heart break /throws confetti
I disagree with you, I love how this 3 shots ended. I have enjoyed every single seconds of reading all three of them and the fact that this ended with something to think about. It wasn't a complete happy ending but it wasn't the 'end' either. Another thing about this is that, I seriously held my breath when Jessica said 'I love you' first and not Donghae. That just made it a lot more special.
Wow, what else can I say? I love absolutely everything that you write but this, really has got to be one of my favorite. The way Donghae and Jessica and those other side characters are written is perfect and right on the spot.
Thank you for sharing this with us again!
Memming this ♥
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secondly, i love minah.
and i love you too, i'm so glad you read through this whole thing. it took me forever to write, but idek. i wrote this up at 3 00 am after watching my sister's keeper lol, so i was in an angsty mood. but, for the sake of haesica, i decided not to make it super angsty (although, i was EXTREMELY tempted too.) but i am really glad you read this yuri ~ it makes me super happy. i really appreciate it!
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BUT OH MY GOSH THIS WAS SOOO AMAZING.
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I would write a super long, three page comment, but there's something I have to say about almost everything in this fic, so that would be kind of pointless XD
First, the Taeyeon-Jessica relationship. I almost died when Jessica started crying that last day of school. She seemed like such a loner, so reserved and kept to herself, that it was surprising that she even let Taeyeon in that far.
decides to cry first, let it actually show how much a month of friendship can mean to her; how much Taeyeon means to her.
I couldn't help but quote this because dfkadf JESSICA. You write her so well. Taeyeon is such a sweet person, and I guess she kind of broke into this outer shell that Jessica had built around herself and her school work. I think, even more so than Donghae and Krystal, Taeyeon really made this permanent impact on her as a friend ( ... )
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OMG IT'S HERE IT'S HERE THE ENDING /SPAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
be back with my proper comment ;p
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now, my COMMENT. . . . . . . . . . . . .. .
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This continued until the next chapter, and by then her life literally changed. she gained new friends that turned her silence into laughter; her alone-time into "happy sundays." i'd like to say it was actually my favorite chap out of the three because it had angst in the background (jessica was still leaving after everything that will happen) yet it had a mix of romance, fluff, sincerity and friendship; and of pure, innocent, first love. this was the part where jessica, although she was against it, allowed herself to fall, where she allowed herself to be free of the chains that held her back from enjoying the past 3/4 years she had spent in that place. I can maybe relate to this that's why I liked it the most ( ... )
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I just had to say that because HaeSica will forever hold a special, special place in my heart and I don't care what haters say because a love as beautiful and that was as innocent as theirs should be held on to forever ♥
I am incoherent because this is lovely and neither of them expected to fall for each other too fast / too deep, but one just had to admit it or the silence will forever break the beauty that is their feelings T___________T I love you for writing this and I love HaeSica forever ♥
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TT TT i really appreciate you waiting for this, cause, i took forever lol. i really appreciate it!
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