[Fic] [Round 20] Ohana Means Family, G

Sep 24, 2008 16:41

Author/Artist: (seamusog)
Characters/Pairings: no pairings, KKM cast focused on Yuuri, Conrart, Wolfram, Gwendal
Word Count: 5405
Rating: G
Any Warnings: none
Theme/Prompt being used: What if Yuuri had grown up in Shin Makoku?

Ohana Means Family

It had been five years since the war and a few months since he'd accomplish the mission of his ( Read more... )

gwendal, round 020, fanfic:2008, challenger - seamusog, conrad, wolfram, yuuri

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disownmereturns September 25 2008, 00:33:07 UTC
Between Gwendal who was a sucker for anything cute to Lord Weller who was a pushover and him, there wasn't a single backbone among Cheri's son that could stand up against any child's adorableness much less the Maou's.

This line was win! :3

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seamusog September 25 2008, 01:13:54 UTC
It's hard enough for them to resist a teenage Yuuri, but a ten-year old looking Yuuri with big dark wide sparkly eyes with a hint of forlornness... *melts from the cuteness*

Thanks for the compliment.

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meomnimi September 26 2008, 02:55:30 UTC
I have to say, I really love this setting. Everything works out and fits in so nicely, and kiddo Yuuri is so adorable!! and Muraken's reaction to Yuuri too. Although I kind of feel sorry for Murata. Yuuri is the only person in Shin Makoku who treates him withouth the Daikenja-tinted glasses. I also love the little detail of Soccer>Baseball belief that Murata holds <3 ( ... )

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meomnimi September 26 2008, 03:02:16 UTC
orz; ^ a line which I didn't finish.
*the age gap between Greta and yuuri and wolf would widen even faster.

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seamusog September 26 2008, 03:46:19 UTC
And the fic had me trying to figure out how old Yuuri'd appear: assume the "5 mazoku year= 1 human year" rule, Yuuri would appear 7/8 in age. or is it the "2.5 half-mazoku year = 1 human year" that you're thinking of? [indeed that'd make him 9~10 in appearance;;] >_> or maybe it's the "half mazoku's aging fluctuates like whoa" line?

In episode 18 when Greta first appeared, they talked about crests and how Wolfram didn't have one. Conrad said that, had he been entitled to one, he would have gotten it when he turned sixteen. (I may be getting this from the novel and manga) Conrad went on that at age 16, Mazoku looked about 10 in human appearance (in novel and manga, that's when Yuuri pictures a 10-year old angelic Wolfram). I based his aging on that.

Also, there was the 10 year old half Mazoku that looked 6 in the Mateki arc.

Yuuri stated that he's 15. Wolf also repeats that he's not even an adult yet. it is also mentioned that he came to Shin Makoku at age 5 at beginning of ficHe came to Shin Makoku as a baby five years after the ( ... )

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meomnimi September 26 2008, 04:14:36 UTC
If memory serves, Conrart got transported to earth still with blood all over him[from the war], in the novel. so it means that he stayed on Earth for mazoku years of approximately 5 years. yep. that makes sense to me now. orz, sorry I read the opening sentences thinking it's 5 earth years instead of 5 other-world years even though it's conrart's narration. My thinking was based completely on yuuri as a 5 year old child coming to Shin Makoku.

somewhere in the novel either Conrart or Yozak also talked about how half-mazoku's aging fluctuates.

another question. How did Yuuri learned baseball?

*O* please put in the Van Da Via scene~!! I'd love to read it!

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mobiuswolf September 29 2008, 15:56:20 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I really liked seeing how Wolfram matured and accepted Yuuri over the course of the story. The last segment is beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.

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seamusog September 29 2008, 18:48:30 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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