Fic for alienashi (2/2)

[formation_akame]

Part 1

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[alienashi]

KYA!!!!

THIS SOUNDS AMAZING I AM READING IT NOW OMG

(translation: i'll be back)

[alienashi]

hi anon, here i am again, with more things to say.

i love how you characterised everyone. i love the jin who's so careful, so thoughtful..he's such a single-track mind that he plunges into danger and HIS PAIN WHEN PI DIED WHY WHY MUST PI DIE *whines* just. i really love the way you wrote him. he's just so into kame, so very in love with him that he justified everything bad bad bad thing that happened to kame and ignored his own will. he's so rational in here, so thoughtful and part of me went T___T at how he just selflessly agreed to love from afar even though he's the victim in this. like. he watched kame as he was drugged and watched kame as he hurt him (GOSH KAME HURT HIM T__T AND HE STILL LOVES HIM :<| CAN I HUG HIM ALREADY ;__;) and the watched kame as he thought jin died.

HE THOUGHT JIN DIED. MY EMOTIONS WAS LIKE. D: D: D; THE WHOLE TIME :(:( WHY ANON WHY YOU SUCH AN S

i like itso. yes. i love him, i love the way you write him. because he has a big heart and he's so. so. romantic /wibbles the scenes with him and kame, i

[kaminikaku]

I said before, and I am still saying it, thanks for your comments, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. I think it's really important in exchanges to see what the recipient prefers, and so I tried to find a balance between your preferences and what I had in mind, and luckily I think it worked out :) I was worried that manly!Jin and girly!Kame would be a problem, but when I sat down and planned it out

[elanielyn]

Yay sci-fi! I love sci-fi. I like how you took the concept of Star Riders and the reading's of Jin's name! I was really shocked at the eight years part :O Poor Pi though ;n; and poor Jin and poor Kazu but I'm sure they'll be alright after they get to Tengoku ♥

[kaminikaku]

Yay scifi indeed, there should be more scifi in the world! The eight years took me by surprise as well, but that's what it appears to have been. Fabulous Nakamaru and his skills. Poor Pi had to die... but at least he didn't suffer? I am sure when they get to Tengoku Jin and Kazu can have some alone time and everything will be alright...unless there is more plot that is there.... bwahahah. There may be. I'm not sure.

[wintersdancer]

Anon, this fic was great. I loved the plot and the world you created. I loved how you developed everything and how you slipped in Kanjani as well (Yasu having problems with colors because of the training sounds legit xD). I really, really liked this fic ♥ and Maru and everyone and here, have my heart ♥

[kaminikaku]

Thanks for reading :) I really enjoyed playing in this world...and it's the first AU akame I have written, so it was a challenge and a pleasure to do it. Kanjani needed a little appearance..and with Yassu and even Massu there, the colours and training seemed like a good excuse for their fashion choices. I am so glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for commenting :)

[yuuki_saya]

sfi-fi!Akame~~!!!!!!! KYAAAAAA~!!!!!!! I love sci-fi and seeing this genre in Akame fic makes me dancing and jumping!

Dear Author-san! You've made really good job! Thank you!

[kaminikaku]

Thanks for reading and commenting :) I love scifi too, so it was a surprise when akame and scifi came together in my head with a plot! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[jamie_spotty]

This was wonderful. Every detail told was very vivid and I could just imagine how Kame looked like when he thought Jin died. It was a nice happy ending I was glad they bothe reconciled and Kame realized that his mother had done her best in making sure both of them were alive to be together again.

I have an idea who you might be but I might be mistaken so I will just wait for reveals and check if my guess is correct. XDDDD

Thanks so much for this wonderful fic. XD

[kaminikaku]

Thanks for reading and commenting. I was a bit worried that the details would get in the way, but I thought it needed a bit of picture painting, given everything was happening so fast! They definitely needed a happy ending and to be reconciled, though I think Kame is still very upset about what happened and I imagine there will be more discussion about that later.... I did consider including a scene where Kame was told about Jin's death, but I will admit I am a coward and couldn't write it....

And Lols...I guess I wasn't the person you were guessing? ;) I am a ninja!

I am do glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your wonderful comment!