hi anon, here i am again, with more things to say.
i love how you characterised everyone. i love the jin who's so careful, so thoughtful..he's such a single-track mind that he plunges into danger and HIS PAIN WHEN PI DIED WHY WHY MUST PI DIE *whines* just. i really love the way you wrote him. he's just so into kame, so very in love with him that he justified everything bad bad bad thing that happened to kame and ignored his own will. he's so rational in here, so thoughtful and part of me went T___T at how he just selflessly agreed to love from afar even though he's the victim in this. like. he watched kame as he was drugged and watched kame as he hurt him (GOSH KAME HURT HIM T__T AND HE STILL LOVES HIM :<| CAN I HUG HIM ALREADY ;__;) and the watched kame as he thought jin died.
HE THOUGHT JIN DIED. MY EMOTIONS WAS LIKE. D: D: D; THE WHOLE TIME :(:( WHY ANON WHY YOU SUCH AN S
i like it
so. yes. i love him, i love the way you write him. because he has a big heart and he's so. so. romantic /wibbles the scenes with him and kame, i went d'awwwwww so many times because they are too lovely, too cute, too amazing.
and i love kame in here. very. very much. kame's like. he's resilient. he refuses to give up. his body gave up but he hated himself for it. and his reaction when jin explained to him ..i can feel how much he hated everything that was going on because it's just so. so. so. kame. it hurts to read him like that, helpless and angry because he couldn't turn back time and fix everything, or fix anything. helpless and angry because he unknowingly had to throw away the person who matters so much to him T___T all the emotions :(:(
and i love everyone. I LOVE THAT NAKAMARU'S EVERYWHERE BECAUSE IT'S AN IMPORTANT DETAIL. VERY IMPORTANT. HAVING NAKAMARU EVERYWHERE MAKES ME HAPPY. AND HAPPY ME HOPEFULLY MAKES A HAPPY YOU.
and there's dr junno. DR JUNNO. my favouritest form of junno to ever took the form of junno. anon, you must have known me. you must have known me so well, there's everything i love here.
and then the ending T__T geez i'm such a sucker for enduring love, it's awesome. so awesome. and i love that you chose my answer *rolls* and expanded it into a universe that lives for itself, because anon-san, i feel the love. i feel it so much. you're awesome. everything's awesome. ilu. very much.
i think i embarrass myself enough..gosh everything's out of place. but again, thank you so so so so so so much for having written this for me. it reminds me why i join exchanges, because everytime i receive something, i feel so loved. thank you for being part of this, thank you for putting so much effort in making me smile. i feel you love so much, i'm grinning from ear to ear.
believe me, anon-san. you have my love, please accept it!
I said before, and I am still saying it, thanks for your comments, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. I think it's really important in exchanges to see what the recipient prefers, and so I tried to find a balance between your preferences and what I had in mind, and luckily I think it worked out :) I was worried that manly!Jin and girly!Kame would be a problem, but when I sat down and planned it out, Kame and Jin were just able to be themselves here, they told me what had happened and I was O.O but then it worked out :) And Nakamaru tapped me on the shoulder and was all, hey I am in charge here, and yeah. It just all worked out. Which scared me slightly. One thought from my beta was that Kame couldn't be blind at the end...and um.. well you see he was. That was also the reason why Pi had to die..to show that things couldn't be fixed, but I do feel kinda bad about it....but yay for enduring love. They certainly endured a lot ;) Thanks for being such an awesome recipient and I am so glad that you took a chance on the sci-fi even if its not a genre you would automatically read :) I appreciate it!
i love how you characterised everyone. i love the jin who's so careful, so thoughtful..he's such a single-track mind that he plunges into danger and HIS PAIN WHEN PI DIED WHY WHY MUST PI DIE *whines* just. i really love the way you wrote him. he's just so into kame, so very in love with him that he justified everything bad bad bad thing that happened to kame and ignored his own will. he's so rational in here, so thoughtful and part of me went T___T at how he just selflessly agreed to love from afar even though he's the victim in this. like. he watched kame as he was drugged and watched kame as he hurt him (GOSH KAME HURT HIM T__T AND HE STILL LOVES HIM :<| CAN I HUG HIM ALREADY ;__;) and the watched kame as he thought jin died.
HE THOUGHT JIN DIED. MY EMOTIONS WAS LIKE. D: D: D; THE WHOLE TIME :(:( WHY ANON WHY YOU SUCH AN S
i like it
so. yes. i love him, i love the way you write him. because he has a big heart and he's so. so. romantic /wibbles the scenes with him and kame, i went d'awwwwww so many times because they are too lovely, too cute, too amazing.
and i love kame in here. very. very much. kame's like. he's resilient. he refuses to give up. his body gave up but he hated himself for it. and his reaction when jin explained to him ..i can feel how much he hated everything that was going on because it's just so. so. so. kame. it hurts to read him like that, helpless and angry because he couldn't turn back time and fix everything, or fix anything. helpless and angry because he unknowingly had to throw away the person who matters so much to him T___T all the emotions :(:(
and i love everyone. I LOVE THAT NAKAMARU'S EVERYWHERE BECAUSE IT'S AN IMPORTANT DETAIL. VERY IMPORTANT. HAVING NAKAMARU EVERYWHERE MAKES ME HAPPY. AND HAPPY ME HOPEFULLY MAKES A HAPPY YOU.
and there's dr junno. DR JUNNO. my favouritest form of junno to ever took the form of junno. anon, you must have known me. you must have known me so well, there's everything i love here.
and then the ending T__T geez i'm such a sucker for enduring love, it's awesome. so awesome. and i love that you chose my answer *rolls* and expanded it into a universe that lives for itself, because anon-san, i feel the love. i feel it so much. you're awesome. everything's awesome. ilu. very much.
i think i embarrass myself enough..gosh everything's out of place. but again, thank you so so so so so so much for having written this for me. it reminds me why i join exchanges, because everytime i receive something, i feel so loved. thank you for being part of this, thank you for putting so much effort in making me smile. i feel you love so much, i'm grinning from ear to ear.
believe me, anon-san. you have my love, please accept it!
thank you so much T__T ilu. again.
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Kame and Jin were just able to be themselves here, they told me what had happened and I was O.O but then it worked out :) And Nakamaru tapped me on the shoulder and was all, hey I am in charge here, and yeah. It just all worked out. Which scared me slightly.
One thought from my beta was that Kame couldn't be blind at the end...and um.. well you see he was. That was also the reason why Pi had to die..to show that things couldn't be fixed, but I do feel kinda bad about it....but yay for enduring love. They certainly endured a lot ;)
Thanks for being such an awesome recipient and I am so glad that you took a chance on the sci-fi even if its not a genre you would automatically read :) I appreciate it!
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