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krystal_32206 April 12 2012, 12:33:31 UTC
This is all I can say after reading...KYAAA!!!!! ヾ(@⌒ー⌒@)ノ

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wintersdancer April 12 2012, 13:56:12 UTC
I loved this fic really much. All the emotions and the details you inserted everywhere. They made this fic seems so real ♥ It reminded me of the time I went to Paris ages ago, and it was like being there again. It reminded me of days in December spent at Parc Guell and the heat and sun and how much I loved the city. It's basically like I visited London as well, even if I have never been there. But really, you created so many pretty images of the settings and everyone was adorable here. I loved all the feelings everywhere that both Kame (especially Kame) and Jin were having. I loved the string of voice mails from the others and how they reacted when Kame came back.

I loved every single word of this fic, because there's was nothing more or nothing less that what you needed to say. It's beautiful.

have my heart?

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yumiko_okahawa April 12 2012, 15:15:26 UTC
Now, this was perfect.

I totally fell in love with this fic. What a nice pace and what authentic characters. I just loved both of them, as they seem strong and independent, both of them, intelligent and at the same time, they have something so soft about their characters that just makes them care. For themselves, each other, everyone else and the world.
Really, I am dying here over your characterisations. They are so, so nice.

And then, the what if AU. The way how you brought them together through the experience of being alone and apart from the band. It's such a lovely approach. And you made it all seem so reasonable. Like, why hasn't it happened yet? *laugh*

And, of course, the way, they finally acknowledged their feelings for each other and all the unspoken words that were only replaced by Kazuya repeating Jin's name, yet, Jin understood just perfectly fine. God, I loved that ♥

I enjoyed every word and every line.
Thank you so very much for taking your time to write this, it turned out just so beautiful. ♥

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yuuki_saya April 12 2012, 20:23:33 UTC
Made me craving for travels... I always wanted to see Paris.

Kame going AWOL? Woah, it's always a good story :D

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pinkporca April 12 2012, 23:19:21 UTC
So so very nicely done. Loved it.

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