[KinKi Fic] Still

Jan 31, 2010 04:08

I felt like writing some KKL, and I set off with a tiny morsel of idea intending it to be the usual fluff... but somewhere between my brainstorm-ish writing and songwriting emulation, this is how it turned out. =P

Disclaimer: This writing is fictional and has no commercial purpose. Characters are real persons belonging to themselves.

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fic, kinki

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fenlings January 30 2010, 21:04:08 UTC
Maybe I'm slow, but I don't get the ~deeper meaning~ at the end. But I like this a lot. The process of songwriting seems really true. I really like the song too. You should write a tune!

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kireira January 31 2010, 02:58:44 UTC
Aw, thanks. ^^

Akh that was very brainstorm-ish, I'm not sure if the 'shallower' meaning gets across in the first place? xP The song implies that "love standing still" is sad because it cannot continue (between KK), but Tsuyoshi's interview answer implies that "love standing still" can also mean it is immortalized (say, towards the fans).

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slyfan January 30 2010, 23:20:55 UTC
like it a lot!

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kireira January 31 2010, 02:59:05 UTC
Thanks for reading! ^^

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kireira January 31 2010, 03:58:44 UTC
Thanks.. I wanted a happy ending but ended up unable of getting it there. ^^0

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hiroko78 February 1 2010, 13:45:32 UTC
Love this story. :)
I really like the ending that Tsuyo put in.

The answers from both of them at the end is so spot on. :) I can really imagine them saying this.

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kireira February 1 2010, 16:00:00 UTC
Thank you!

I get the feeling sometimes their answers were not really answering the question? xD Though I've only read a few of their interviews (i.e. when translated). =P

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fishings February 1 2010, 15:05:41 UTC
Oh goodness, I think this is the embodiment of flangst. > >; Your KinKi always feels so real and I was literally holding my breath when it came to the concert bit. Just like the way the song was meant to leave people hanging and yet 'completed' by Tsuyoshi, there's a satisfying feeling of from reading about the process of songwriting right until its completion. Love it! ;o;

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kireira February 1 2010, 16:04:43 UTC
I'm so glad you got that feeling, because I really wanted a happy ending for this and yet it didn't feel right so I couldn't get it there.. and then I made the excuse that the fic was supposed to be 'hanging' just like the song. =||||

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fishings February 1 2010, 17:03:25 UTC
I wouldn't consider it an angsty ending in any way because from my point of view, Tsuyoshi's explanation seemed to hint at possibilities. So definitely bittersweet! And speaking of that, did I mention how I fell in love with your one line of summary? :p

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kireira February 2 2010, 00:51:35 UTC
=D Thanks!

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