I need to put it on the "Axel needs to burn" hitlist...
Second part.
Title: |Axel|Is any of this for real..or not?|Demyx|Ch.07 Organization XIII
Author: Neopetgirl
Rating: One for the grammatical errors, and another for the OOC.
Full Species(es): Blankus Sueus
Hair Color (include adjectives): None
Eye Color (include adjectives): None
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: A pretty smile?
Special Possessions (if any): A diary and a backpack. (Could possibly have grenades)
Origin: Nowhere
Connections To Canon Characters: Demyx and Axel are possible love interests… again. (sigh)
Special Abilities: Has the ability to forgot stuff and then spontaneously remember it… at the same time.
Other Annoying Traits: Slams doors in the Organization’s faces, putting her hands in her face (Yes, you heard me correctly), and getting Demyx and Axel to do whatever she wants to do.
I Say/Notes: It’s not that bad, but the grammatical errors get on your nerves after awhile and the OOC-ness strikes back, literally.
You blushed lightly from getting another sweet comment,gradually you felt your face getting hotter each moment.So you hurried and ate at a quick pace,but still maintained yourself on completely pigging out.You were pretty hungry,after you got you walked up without notice and waved goodbye to Demyx.
Demyx: *sings* So long, farewell, auf…
Zexion: *La-lexicon!*
Axel: Demyx, we have to do it for your own good.
"Okay bye!" he waved happily.
You then started on your way to--
Wait where again?
Axel: To the Batcave!
You placed your hands in your face,not knowing what to do.
Zexion: *cringes* That must hurt.
Axel: *in a singsong tone* You’ll poke your eye out, you’ll poke your eye out…
You weren't going anywhere for awhile,so you were guessing you'd have to adapt to the place.But where exactly was that room of yours?
You tried searching for the room,you then came across another hall,which you didn't know where any of them lead to.
You walked past the doors swiftly then hastily glanced back.
"Well I haven't checked these doors yet.."
You noticed that the symbols engraved on each door were actually Roman numerals.
You counted them all to be twelve doors,you closed your eyes and held out your hands infront of you to pick a random door.
There were twelve doors,so you randomly picked out 'VI'.
Axel: Wait, there’s thirteen doors! Liar!
Zexion: Apparently, this Sue has no idea how to count.
"Okay here goes nothing.."
You opened the door and blinked there was-
Axel: Zexy watching a nature documentary!
Demyx: The exorcist!
Zexion: Me ready to strangle you.
Nothing.The room seemed to be isolated,vacant.There was no one in sight,by the looks of it,you then having a general,thorough conviction that no one was living in there.You then walked over to the bed that layed not too far away from where you were standing.You seated yourself on the bed and rested your palms on your knees while you crossed your legs.
You slowly let you eyelids fall closed,breathing in deeply.
Axel: *as Sue* Ohmn…ohmn…
Zexion: Wait a sec, why am I not there?
Demyx: The author didn’t like you, so you’re probably dead.
Zexion: That’s much better than being in this badfic.
'Do I have any purpose,as to why I'm here?
Demyx: *as Sue* What is the meaning of life?
Axel: *as Sue* How many roads must a man walk down?
Zexion: *as Sue* What’s six times seven?
All: 42!
If so why?Ugh!I'm so stupid..
Axel: Wow, truth from a Sue. Let’s bask in this moment through a moment of silence.
*silence*
Axel: Okay, back to the fic!
I just wanted a little fresh air..and now what?!I'm stuck here,instead of staying with Sora..'
During the recent week that you've been here in well however this came to be..you've been constantly worrying about your mom, graduating your last year in school,why were you here?
So many different subjects had flooded your mind,and it wasn't going leave your head anytime soon..
Zexion: *as Sue* Angst, angst, angst.
'Mom I'm sorry...'
A single hot tear slid down your eye,hitting the surface of your hand.You quickly wiped it out of your eye.
Demyx: Well, she finally got her hands out of her face.
"Hey,_______."
Functioning energetically,you cocked your head slightly as you stared at Axel questioningly.
"Oh yeah hey Axel.." you said sounding a bit sad.
"Were you looking for your room?"
You then threw on a convincing smile,feeling bashful,you nodded shyly.
"Uh yeah..is this one mines?" you asked softly.
Axel: *as himself* No, that one’s grenades. It’s Xenmas’ room that has the land mines.
"Nah,It's this one,come on I'll show you." he then motioned you over to another room which was imprinted with the roman numeral 'XII'.
"This used to be Larxene's room."
Axel: Damn, Larxene isn’t alive to torment this girl!
Demyx: Larxene’s lucky…
"Used to be?" you asked confusedly.
"She's not here anymore..but believe me you're going to be better off without her,don't worry about it!"
"Oh okay..if you say so." you nodded taking in enough information.
"Well,thanks Axel for the help!" you said feeling relieved.
You turned the knob of the door,and stepped forth.Is was very similar to the one you were just in.You sighed and placed the only thing you held to your name.Your backpack,you laid it down beside you as you sprawled out across the bed lazily.You shut your eyes momentarily,but you felt as if someone was watching you nearby..oh yah Axel was still there..
Axel: *as himself* Demyx! Help me bind her to the bed! We need to perform the ceremony!
You opened your eyes and gazed back at him,while he leaned on your door way.
"Need something?" you asked alittle anxious.
He shoke his head,coming out of whatever fantasy world he was in.
Axel: A world where characters like me are not OOC-ed, and Sues were hunted… *lost in thought*
Demyx: *whacks Axel on the head* Snap out of it!
Axel: Hey! You interrupted my dream!
Demyx: You’re suffering with me.
You giggled quietly as you closed the door on his face.
Axel: *cringes* Ouch…
Zexion: *as Sue* get out of my room, you pervert! *dodges chakrams*
You then collapsed on the bed,feeling pretty reduced from your strength.
You lied there on your side,facing the wall.You shut your eyes briefly,but nothing seemed to work.
Whenever you were alone,you'd always think.What really was glued into your mind was where you were now.
'This group..Organization XIII...are they all nobodies?They are right??
Zexion: We are always right.
Demyx: So we’re never left?
Zexion: *facepalm*
But Demyx and Axel..they seem so friendly..I almost forgot what Yen Sid said!They try to fool theirselves and others that they have emotions...but the truth is..they don't really have any...but I still don't know whats so special about me..'
Axel: You are a Sue. Of course you’re speshal.
You promptly pulled your journal out of your backpack,flipping through the pages of the small book.
In a result to pulling out your pencil,you quickly started on about the day you just had.
Axel: *as Sue* Dear Diary, I planted the grenades today. I am expecting to use them when the time is right.
Demyx: *as Sue* Dear Diary, today I attacked a refrigerator and ate the meat of it. It cost 1 million dollars to eat it.
Zexion: *as Sue* Dear Diary, today I made a complete fool of myself, and yet OOC-ed Axel and Demyx liked it. I shall destroy them tomorrow.
All: *shudder*
Well here I am again,writing all my secrets,and feelings to you.Right now you're the only I have to confide to..no else.
Demyx: *as diary* And how do you feel about that?
Axel: *as Sue* I feel angsty yet I act like I’m cute because I want to steal everyone’s money.
Demyx: *as diary* And how do you feel about that?
But anyways,
My day was very strange..different then all of my other days back on Earth.
I got to meet Sora!I almost tackled him to the ground,bombarding him with hugs.
*somewhere outside the theater*
Sora: *shudders*
Kairi: What’s wrong, Sora?
Sora: Somewhere, somehow, someone is tackling and glomping me.
But I didn't do that..instead I made myself look like a complete fool infront of him,Donald,and Goofy..
But I got to help them get to their destination.
Zexion: I am creepily reminded of the movie “Final Destination”.
Demyx: See? She does want to kill us all!
So I guess I did kind of help..
Soon after I heard they were going somewhere..already..I didn't want to just stay there I wanted to come along!I did too.It was really awesome hanging out with Sora and his friends.But I don't know if I'll see them anytime soon..well since I pretty much got kidnapped.
But I still don't know much about where I am now.Apparently I've met Organization XIII..and I've met three members so far..Axel..Demyx..and whoever their boss is.
Axel: It’s Xenmas! Is that so hard to remember? Xenmas. Got it- *looks surprised and clamps hands over mouth*
Demyx: C’mon, I just know you want to say it…
Axel: *in a small voice* memorized…
Demyx: Good boy, Axel. *pats on head*
Axel: *Ca-chakram!*
I'm having a hard time adjusting to them because,they're nobodies..they don't have hearts..they can't feel emotions..oh how I pity them.
Axel: Please, don’t pity us. We pity you.
Demyx: I heartily agree!
Zexion and Axel: *stare at Demyx*
Demyx: Darn, I keep forgetting to not use heart-related expressions!
Even if they're pretending to feel.They sure do a heck of a job at it..
They gave me a room,and I was told I have this 'special talent'.What it is?
Axel: What is it!! You need to install spellcheck in your diary, you know!
I don't really know exactly..but I was told I'd be informed tommorrow.But for now I'll try to get a better nights' rest.
~_________
You sighed and got up from your bed,closing and stowing away your journal.As a result,you opened the window that you noticed,straight across from your bed.You dreamily sighed,you really started having a little excitement in life.
You gazed intently at the surroundings outside of where you stood,it was quite dark...and it was raining now.(me:wow alot of rain in this story huh?Sorry its my favorite type of weather..)
Axel: NOOOOOOO! The DOOM of the author’s note!
Demyx: Run for your lives!
Zexion: *La-lexicons both!*
Axel and Demyx: Owww…
Zexion: Stop with that joke already!
You slowly stretched your arm to its fullest length.As the tiny water droplets hit the surface of your palm repeatedly.You listened closely to the pattern the rain made on your window once you closed it.You closed your eyes and sighed.
"Whats going on?"
YAY!No cliffhanger there right?!^^
All: *gape*
Axel: How is that not a cliffhanger?
Zexion: I have no idea.
Awwww!!A Demmy fan!!Isn't he so adorable?*glomps Demyx*
Demyx: GET OFF OF ME! I DON”T WANT TO BE GLOMPED!
Axel: Aw, “Demmy” has another fan!
Demyx: *glares* AkuRoku…
Axel: *cringes* I’ll be good now…
Thanks for reading!^^
Oh another Axel fan lol j/k Axel's okay..but uh.. Demyx pwns him!
Demyx: Hah! I beat you after all!
Axel: *scoffs* At what? Sitar Hero?
Demyx: Well, I do have the top ten high scores…
Sorry..I'm a Demyx girl..lol
Thanks for reading!^__^
Zexion: Didn’t she just say that?
Axel: The badfic is on an endless loop!
All: NOOOOOOOOOO!
You don't like either huh?Who do you like Sora?Or maybe no one from Kingdom Hearts?Awww you're really missing out!^__^ lol XD
Demyx: Is it over?
Axel: Yes. Thank darkness.
Zexion: Now I can get back to planning your demises…
Axel: What did you say?
Zexion: Nothing. *smirks evilly and teleports out*
Demyx: Should we be worried?
Axel: Nah, he’ll probably be distracted by something shiny…
*meanwhile, Zexion is staring at a shiny button lying on the street*
Zexion: …shiny… Now what was I supposed to be doing at this moment?
Title: |Axel|Is any of this for real..or not?|Demyx|Ch.07 Organization XIII
Author: Neopetgirl
Rating: One for the grammatical errors, and another for the OOC.
Full Species(es): Blankus Sueus
Hair Color (include adjectives): None
Eye Color (include adjectives): None
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: A pretty smile?
Special Possessions (if any): A diary and a backpack. (Could possibly have grenades)
Origin: Nowhere
Connections To Canon Characters: Demyx and Axel are possible love interests… again. (sigh)
Special Abilities: Has the ability to forgot stuff and then spontaneously remember it… at the same time.
Other Annoying Traits: Slams doors in the Organization’s faces, putting her hands in her face (Yes, you heard me correctly), and getting Demyx and Axel to do whatever she wants to do.
I Say/Notes: It’s not that bad, but the grammatical errors get on your nerves after awhile and the OOC-ness strikes back, literally.
You blushed lightly from getting another sweet comment,gradually you felt your face getting hotter each moment.So you hurried and ate at a quick pace,but still maintained yourself on completely pigging out.You were pretty hungry,after you got you walked up without notice and waved goodbye to Demyx.
Demyx: *sings* So long, farewell, auf…
Zexion: *La-lexicon!*
Axel: Demyx, we have to do it for your own good.
"Okay bye!" he waved happily.
You then started on your way to--
Wait where again?
Axel: To the Batcave!
You placed your hands in your face,not knowing what to do.
Zexion: *cringes* That must hurt.
Axel: *in a singsong tone* You’ll poke your eye out, you’ll poke your eye out…
You weren't going anywhere for awhile,so you were guessing you'd have to adapt to the place.But where exactly was that room of yours?
You tried searching for the room,you then came across another hall,which you didn't know where any of them lead to.
You walked past the doors swiftly then hastily glanced back.
"Well I haven't checked these doors yet.."
You noticed that the symbols engraved on each door were actually Roman numerals.
You counted them all to be twelve doors,you closed your eyes and held out your hands infront of you to pick a random door.
There were twelve doors,so you randomly picked out 'VI'.
Axel: Wait, there’s thirteen doors! Liar!
Zexion: Apparently, this Sue has no idea how to count.
"Okay here goes nothing.."
You opened the door and blinked there was-
Axel: Zexy watching a nature documentary!
Demyx: The exorcist!
Zexion: Me ready to strangle you.
Nothing.The room seemed to be isolated,vacant.There was no one in sight,by the looks of it,you then having a general,thorough conviction that no one was living in there.You then walked over to the bed that layed not too far away from where you were standing.You seated yourself on the bed and rested your palms on your knees while you crossed your legs.
You slowly let you eyelids fall closed,breathing in deeply.
Axel: *as Sue* Ohmn…ohmn…
Zexion: Wait a sec, why am I not there?
Demyx: The author didn’t like you, so you’re probably dead.
Zexion: That’s much better than being in this badfic.
'Do I have any purpose,as to why I'm here?
Demyx: *as Sue* What is the meaning of life?
Axel: *as Sue* How many roads must a man walk down?
Zexion: *as Sue* What’s six times seven?
All: 42!
If so why?Ugh!I'm so stupid..
Axel: Wow, truth from a Sue. Let’s bask in this moment through a moment of silence.
*silence*
Axel: Okay, back to the fic!
I just wanted a little fresh air..and now what?!I'm stuck here,instead of staying with Sora..'
During the recent week that you've been here in well however this came to be..you've been constantly worrying about your mom, graduating your last year in school,why were you here?
So many different subjects had flooded your mind,and it wasn't going leave your head anytime soon..
Zexion: *as Sue* Angst, angst, angst.
'Mom I'm sorry...'
A single hot tear slid down your eye,hitting the surface of your hand.You quickly wiped it out of your eye.
Demyx: Well, she finally got her hands out of her face.
"Hey,_______."
Functioning energetically,you cocked your head slightly as you stared at Axel questioningly.
"Oh yeah hey Axel.." you said sounding a bit sad.
"Were you looking for your room?"
You then threw on a convincing smile,feeling bashful,you nodded shyly.
"Uh yeah..is this one mines?" you asked softly.
Axel: *as himself* No, that one’s grenades. It’s Xenmas’ room that has the land mines.
"Nah,It's this one,come on I'll show you." he then motioned you over to another room which was imprinted with the roman numeral 'XII'.
"This used to be Larxene's room."
Axel: Damn, Larxene isn’t alive to torment this girl!
Demyx: Larxene’s lucky…
"Used to be?" you asked confusedly.
"She's not here anymore..but believe me you're going to be better off without her,don't worry about it!"
"Oh okay..if you say so." you nodded taking in enough information.
"Well,thanks Axel for the help!" you said feeling relieved.
You turned the knob of the door,and stepped forth.Is was very similar to the one you were just in.You sighed and placed the only thing you held to your name.Your backpack,you laid it down beside you as you sprawled out across the bed lazily.You shut your eyes momentarily,but you felt as if someone was watching you nearby..oh yah Axel was still there..
Axel: *as himself* Demyx! Help me bind her to the bed! We need to perform the ceremony!
You opened your eyes and gazed back at him,while he leaned on your door way.
"Need something?" you asked alittle anxious.
He shoke his head,coming out of whatever fantasy world he was in.
Axel: A world where characters like me are not OOC-ed, and Sues were hunted… *lost in thought*
Demyx: *whacks Axel on the head* Snap out of it!
Axel: Hey! You interrupted my dream!
Demyx: You’re suffering with me.
You giggled quietly as you closed the door on his face.
Axel: *cringes* Ouch…
Zexion: *as Sue* get out of my room, you pervert! *dodges chakrams*
You then collapsed on the bed,feeling pretty reduced from your strength.
You lied there on your side,facing the wall.You shut your eyes briefly,but nothing seemed to work.
Whenever you were alone,you'd always think.What really was glued into your mind was where you were now.
'This group..Organization XIII...are they all nobodies?They are right??
Zexion: We are always right.
Demyx: So we’re never left?
Zexion: *facepalm*
But Demyx and Axel..they seem so friendly..I almost forgot what Yen Sid said!They try to fool theirselves and others that they have emotions...but the truth is..they don't really have any...but I still don't know whats so special about me..'
Axel: You are a Sue. Of course you’re speshal.
You promptly pulled your journal out of your backpack,flipping through the pages of the small book.
In a result to pulling out your pencil,you quickly started on about the day you just had.
Axel: *as Sue* Dear Diary, I planted the grenades today. I am expecting to use them when the time is right.
Demyx: *as Sue* Dear Diary, today I attacked a refrigerator and ate the meat of it. It cost 1 million dollars to eat it.
Zexion: *as Sue* Dear Diary, today I made a complete fool of myself, and yet OOC-ed Axel and Demyx liked it. I shall destroy them tomorrow.
All: *shudder*
Well here I am again,writing all my secrets,and feelings to you.Right now you're the only I have to confide to..no else.
Demyx: *as diary* And how do you feel about that?
Axel: *as Sue* I feel angsty yet I act like I’m cute because I want to steal everyone’s money.
Demyx: *as diary* And how do you feel about that?
But anyways,
My day was very strange..different then all of my other days back on Earth.
I got to meet Sora!I almost tackled him to the ground,bombarding him with hugs.
*somewhere outside the theater*
Sora: *shudders*
Kairi: What’s wrong, Sora?
Sora: Somewhere, somehow, someone is tackling and glomping me.
But I didn't do that..instead I made myself look like a complete fool infront of him,Donald,and Goofy..
But I got to help them get to their destination.
Zexion: I am creepily reminded of the movie “Final Destination”.
Demyx: See? She does want to kill us all!
So I guess I did kind of help..
Soon after I heard they were going somewhere..already..I didn't want to just stay there I wanted to come along!I did too.It was really awesome hanging out with Sora and his friends.But I don't know if I'll see them anytime soon..well since I pretty much got kidnapped.
But I still don't know much about where I am now.Apparently I've met Organization XIII..and I've met three members so far..Axel..Demyx..and whoever their boss is.
Axel: It’s Xenmas! Is that so hard to remember? Xenmas. Got it- *looks surprised and clamps hands over mouth*
Demyx: C’mon, I just know you want to say it…
Axel: *in a small voice* memorized…
Demyx: Good boy, Axel. *pats on head*
Axel: *Ca-chakram!*
I'm having a hard time adjusting to them because,they're nobodies..they don't have hearts..they can't feel emotions..oh how I pity them.
Axel: Please, don’t pity us. We pity you.
Demyx: I heartily agree!
Zexion and Axel: *stare at Demyx*
Demyx: Darn, I keep forgetting to not use heart-related expressions!
Even if they're pretending to feel.They sure do a heck of a job at it..
They gave me a room,and I was told I have this 'special talent'.What it is?
Axel: What is it!! You need to install spellcheck in your diary, you know!
I don't really know exactly..but I was told I'd be informed tommorrow.But for now I'll try to get a better nights' rest.
~_________
You sighed and got up from your bed,closing and stowing away your journal.As a result,you opened the window that you noticed,straight across from your bed.You dreamily sighed,you really started having a little excitement in life.
You gazed intently at the surroundings outside of where you stood,it was quite dark...and it was raining now.(me:wow alot of rain in this story huh?Sorry its my favorite type of weather..)
Axel: NOOOOOOO! The DOOM of the author’s note!
Demyx: Run for your lives!
Zexion: *La-lexicons both!*
Axel and Demyx: Owww…
Zexion: Stop with that joke already!
You slowly stretched your arm to its fullest length.As the tiny water droplets hit the surface of your palm repeatedly.You listened closely to the pattern the rain made on your window once you closed it.You closed your eyes and sighed.
"Whats going on?"
YAY!No cliffhanger there right?!^^
All: *gape*
Axel: How is that not a cliffhanger?
Zexion: I have no idea.
Awwww!!A Demmy fan!!Isn't he so adorable?*glomps Demyx*
Demyx: GET OFF OF ME! I DON”T WANT TO BE GLOMPED!
Axel: Aw, “Demmy” has another fan!
Demyx: *glares* AkuRoku…
Axel: *cringes* I’ll be good now…
Thanks for reading!^^
Oh another Axel fan lol j/k Axel's okay..but uh.. Demyx pwns him!
Demyx: Hah! I beat you after all!
Axel: *scoffs* At what? Sitar Hero?
Demyx: Well, I do have the top ten high scores…
Sorry..I'm a Demyx girl..lol
Thanks for reading!^__^
Zexion: Didn’t she just say that?
Axel: The badfic is on an endless loop!
All: NOOOOOOOOOO!
You don't like either huh?Who do you like Sora?Or maybe no one from Kingdom Hearts?Awww you're really missing out!^__^ lol XD
Demyx: Is it over?
Axel: Yes. Thank darkness.
Zexion: Now I can get back to planning your demises…
Axel: What did you say?
Zexion: Nothing. *smirks evilly and teleports out*
Demyx: Should we be worried?
Axel: Nah, he’ll probably be distracted by something shiny…
*meanwhile, Zexion is staring at a shiny button lying on the street*
Zexion: …shiny… Now what was I supposed to be doing at this moment?