Guardian Part Four

Jul 29, 2012 17:13


Part Four )

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falcytan_dream August 2 2012, 07:09:05 UTC
When you said this was the first fic you've ever written, I did not expect the story to be how amazing and powerful it is. It's true to its dystopia name is and is absolutely heart crushing and beyond tragic. You wrote the story so well that I was sucked into it and made the mistake of forgetting that this is a dystopia fic. I don't think I've read another story that so great at sucking your heart into such happiness and then crushing it all with the SPN reality of Heaven-sucks.

I can't tell if I feel more sorrow for Dean or for Castiel, because oh-good-gods both of them have such shitty (yet very true to canon) lives here. So I'm just gonna go crawl into the corner with a box of tissues for both of them... *weeps*

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king_stitch August 11 2012, 08:03:06 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I've written before, but nothing like this so it was a real challenge for me and your comment makes me feel that I succeed in what I tried to do and that all my work really paid off! So thank you again for reading and commenting! <33

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mai2921 August 4 2012, 19:20:16 UTC
This is so good, and so sad.

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king_stitch August 11 2012, 08:03:41 UTC
Thank you!!

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lgmkeefer August 4 2012, 23:23:57 UTC
This is amazing. I loved it.
And for a first fix, you truly have talent.
Please, keep writing

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king_stitch August 11 2012, 08:04:20 UTC
I'll do my best! And thank you so much!

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disturbingemily August 7 2012, 12:06:36 UTC
oh wow. At first I was charmed by Cas' and Dean's relation/ship, but then they erased Dean's memory and all I wanted to do was sob. The end is so heart-wrenching. Are you sure there would not be a sequel?
I loved the story, though, great job!

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king_stitch August 11 2012, 08:07:58 UTC
Thank you!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I actually have an idea for a sequel but I don't think it'll be up anytime soon unfortunately :c

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animechic January 15 2014, 19:49:57 UTC
Hello! I'm super late to the party, as this ended a year and a half ago . . . but did that sequel ever pop up? I'm dying for more!

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starryeyesx1 August 11 2012, 17:09:40 UTC
God, I loved this. So amazing but so sad. I love your writing. I hope that sequel comes sooner than later.

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king_stitch August 14 2012, 07:37:48 UTC
Thank you!!! And I hope it gets done soon too! <3

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