I don't know if it was being stupid or lazy...
Dear fanbrat,
I'm not afraid to say you're a pretty good drawer. I saw a lot of pictures in your dA gallery, and you have a pretty good grasp of line drawing and coloring with the computer.
HOWEVER!
One of your most recent works depicting a gaggle of your OCs going to school just flabberghasts me. Not because of the drawing itself, because it was relatively cute. What makes me mad is that you seem to think copy-pasting the names from Organization XIII and some other KH characters is okay. But wait, you didn't copy them DIRECTLY! There's Namene and Roxys, so obviously they're different people. Oh, and for some reason, you seem to think it a good idea to combine the names with Pokemon. Honestly, Xigglybuff? Houndem?
I didn't even bother reading the bios beyond the names, though, at least after I saw that 'Namene' also seemed to have yoinked Namine's characterization. Honestly, how is that okay? It isn't, and you're lucky that I don't like to directly create conflict, or you'd get a very nasty surprise the next time you check your reviews.
Sincerly,
A very angered writer
PS: Axsol makes me think of PineSol, and now I can't get the image of Axel dressed as a cleaning lady out of my head. Thanks a lot.
I'm not afraid to say you're a pretty good drawer. I saw a lot of pictures in your dA gallery, and you have a pretty good grasp of line drawing and coloring with the computer.
HOWEVER!
One of your most recent works depicting a gaggle of your OCs going to school just flabberghasts me. Not because of the drawing itself, because it was relatively cute. What makes me mad is that you seem to think copy-pasting the names from Organization XIII and some other KH characters is okay. But wait, you didn't copy them DIRECTLY! There's Namene and Roxys, so obviously they're different people. Oh, and for some reason, you seem to think it a good idea to combine the names with Pokemon. Honestly, Xigglybuff? Houndem?
I didn't even bother reading the bios beyond the names, though, at least after I saw that 'Namene' also seemed to have yoinked Namine's characterization. Honestly, how is that okay? It isn't, and you're lucky that I don't like to directly create conflict, or you'd get a very nasty surprise the next time you check your reviews.
Sincerly,
A very angered writer
PS: Axsol makes me think of PineSol, and now I can't get the image of Axel dressed as a cleaning lady out of my head. Thanks a lot.