Uh..
FIRST of all, I want to apologize for sounding like a total and complete idiot last night. x.x; I misworded what I said, so pardon my stupidity on that part.
But, for the MAIN thing, another rant about a certain fic.
Dear author,
I ship Zexion/Kairi. It is my favorite crack pairing, and it's great to see more people writing for it.
HOWEVER, when mentioning Sora and co journeying in a flashback, where were Donald and Goofy? Oh, there was Cloud, Leon, MIDGAR, and things...but where, might I ask, is the Disney? And, for that matter, why would KH Cloud and Leon be in Midgar, when it contradicts things?
It's cool that you are having FF cameos, but ignoring all aspects of the Disney part of KH just isn't right.
NEXT, why is Zexion saying things like "friggin", acting all angst, and not speaking in a sophisticated manner. No offense, but Zexion is written almost as if he's another Cloud or something at times.
The prose is ok, but characterization needs work, ESPECIALLY Zexion.
...
In other words, this fic is the one I am speaking of...Not terrible, but...it bugs me. Sad thing is, I acted all nice in my review with concrit mixed in because of how people at the pit tend to take any serious critique as flaming. .-.
But, for the MAIN thing, another rant about a certain fic.
Dear author,
I ship Zexion/Kairi. It is my favorite crack pairing, and it's great to see more people writing for it.
HOWEVER, when mentioning Sora and co journeying in a flashback, where were Donald and Goofy? Oh, there was Cloud, Leon, MIDGAR, and things...but where, might I ask, is the Disney? And, for that matter, why would KH Cloud and Leon be in Midgar, when it contradicts things?
It's cool that you are having FF cameos, but ignoring all aspects of the Disney part of KH just isn't right.
NEXT, why is Zexion saying things like "friggin", acting all angst, and not speaking in a sophisticated manner. No offense, but Zexion is written almost as if he's another Cloud or something at times.
The prose is ok, but characterization needs work, ESPECIALLY Zexion.
...
In other words, this fic is the one I am speaking of...Not terrible, but...it bugs me. Sad thing is, I acted all nice in my review with concrit mixed in because of how people at the pit tend to take any serious critique as flaming. .-.