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I don't read smut much, but when I do, I like it to be coherent.
You, dear writer, are actually rather amazing - a bit florid, yes, but otherwise highly understandable and pretty good at emotions.
However, when I'm reading about a character taking his jacket off for the fourth time, it kind of jars the scene, y'know? Especially when there's no other real mention of clothing coming off (except referencing Nomura's zipper fetish).
Thank you, and have a pleasant day.
You, dear writer, are actually rather amazing - a bit florid, yes, but otherwise highly understandable and pretty good at emotions.
However, when I'm reading about a character taking his jacket off for the fourth time, it kind of jars the scene, y'know? Especially when there's no other real mention of clothing coming off (except referencing Nomura's zipper fetish).
Thank you, and have a pleasant day.